Reviews for Political Alliances |
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![]() ![]() ![]() good story man can't wait for the next chapter but please kill Danzo |
![]() ![]() ![]() I must say the Suna Council dissuasion on Naruto was hilarious, especially because it sounded so logical from the outside. I didn’t like the Konoha Council meeting however. They shouldn’t have been THAT dismissive of Naruto. They should be just as aware of Naruto’s accomplishment after the academy as Suna was. I actually think the Konoha Council is smart enough to realize at the minimum they picked Naruto because he defeated Gaara. Basically I see it this way, The Suna Council drew the logical conclusion based on the information they had at hand. While the Konoha Council couldn't see 3 inches infront of there face. |
![]() ![]() your story looks good, i hope you don't left it incomplete... keep going :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story that you have here. I've seen other stories who had a similar idea and even the same couple but they were either not that good or left unfinished. Hopefully the same doesn't happen with this story. Obvously the council in Suna has assumed to much when it comes to Naruto. Their reaction if they were to find out the truth would certainly be an amusing sight. Can't wait to read when both Naruto and Temari find out about their upcoming engagement and how everyone will react when they discover it as well. Question though, is this going to change how the series went after Tsunade returned to Konoha? Only time will tell I guess. Anyway, until next time, see ya and keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I look forward to reading the rest of the story. Danzo and the Council are going to $h!T a brick when they find that who Naruto's family is, and the Suna Council will feel vindicated for choosing the son of the Yellow Flash. When Naruto returns from his trip with the Spiraling Sphere technique, I will enjoy watching how he reacts to his new bride. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far, this is wonderful. Wonder what will happen when Suna finds out that Naruto is the son of the Yellow Flash? Should prove interesting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting iv never seen a cross village arranged marriage in a naruto fanfic I look forward to your next update _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah so you went ahead with this one, it was an interesting way to start things out. I sort of dont blame the Suna council at all for not believing Temari's report after all who would ever believe half the stuff Naruto does. Creating that many shadow clones would be insane for anyone else and unheard of. It was nice to see Gaara's reaction as well, I figured it would involved some vague threats but I wonder how he will react when he learns they chose Naruto. As for Danzo that guy really needs to get a life and stop trying to manipulate others, I say you have Gaara feed him to the sand at some point lol. Should be an interesting fic later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story! can't wait to see naruto's expression! :) |