I would never ship Tayuya and Sasuke. You would have done better with Karin since she’s an Orochimaru captive. Shipping Tayuya and Sasuke is gross and ruined the story for me.

I love you for how you bashed Sakura here for her obsession with Sasuke.

Cute

This was a great story, there were a few spelling errors and grammar errors, but it wasn't bad enough that it took me out of the story. You really nailed how all the characters are suppose to be, and the big thing here is that you made the pairings believable as well as the story. That's the biggest win for an writer of a popular series doing their own thing, when I can get behind a pairing that wasn't canon or even see and believe that it could happen when I watch the actual series it's a job well done. I really hope you change youre mind eventually about making a sequel to this amazing story, you did a great job of doing your own thing while also keeping it on track with anime/manga so hopefully you can continue this universe. Gonna read your Naruto Hatake stories next. Thanks so much for your time in reading my review, and for a crazy ride(that I hope is not over for Naruto and Temari XD) and for this story.

is there one with the lemons in it

good story.

oh shit! nevermind I thought they caught up but turns out to be a trap!

WTFFF they reached extremely fast in my opinion.

noob naruto

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Its so good love it

Great chapter thank you

Great chapter thank you

Great chapter thank you

Great chapter loved it