This story was incredible, sucks that there won't be a sequel but this story was great nonetheless thanks for writing it

If Naruto does not enter nine tails chakra murder mode at any point during Temari’s rescue saying I’ll be surprised would be an understatement

What’s with the commas before names? It’s driving me crazy. Other than that I’m enjoying it so far.

I am very dissapointed that Naruto did not ignore everything he learned and go greet Gaara when the Suna group arrived.

Hehe. The sand elders have protagonist sensing powers.

Jokes on you in boruto his kid does feel that kinda sadness in life

Amazing story! Glad I finally got around to reading it.

It seems cruel to announce the marriage alliance to the entire group instead of just Naruto in private first. Like a big screw you, at least Temari got that.

I see a mountain of potential for this story if you gave it a sequel especially for sasuke if he choses to take over the sound village.

So glad im alone rn, actual tears fell at the ending of the chapter ;3; This is really good

Cute, but it felt like it lost steam by this point. Well, I’ve always been more about the journey than the destination so maybe it’s just me. Not that they aren’t going to go through a lot more together but I do wish there had been more about them getting closer before the wedding.

I think you mean "dissected", not "disseminated".

Great story, but please for the love of god stop with the random and much too liberal use of commas.
Otherwise, loving it.

I have to say I love this story so far, it's the first fanfiction I read (at least up too chapter 8) I wasn't a big reader back in 2010ish. But this is the story that made me ship TemariXNaruto. This time I will finish it. My only complaint is I wish it was proof read more.

I am looking forward to chapter 41 and I hope Naruto gains ability to use wood style jutsu.