I like the premise of this story, but one of the first things that hit me was that I felt sorry for Temari, cause Naruto pretty much only eats ramen and I can't help but think that is not a nice smell to sweat or walk into the bathroom after.

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Adult fanfic has the lemon versions. Same title. Very compactionate scene

ur wrong on so many counts sasuke: 1st just cuz u helped found the village and ppl looked up to do doesn't mean that village owes u squat esp when ur clan acted like they were above u and didn't want much to do with u in the 1st place 2nd kakashi didn't blow u off he cant teach what he doesn't know and his job too after the team as a whole not be ur pet trainer 3rd it doesn't matter if u know a lot of tech's u can be beaten by others if u dont a have sound foundation from mastering the basics and the other skills you already know 4th ur being too short sighted and arrogant to realize that A the world doesn't revolve around you B at ur age no matter what u do itachi is be stronger than u period C there is plenty going for right now in the village but ur too short sighted to see it D on ur path u'll never attain true strength

so if this naru/temari then is it also gunna be ShikaIno?

Where's the version with lemons?

OMG Temari is a jealous woman.. how interesting.. i like this story because is so fresh and real.. you make a good job..

Naruto and Temari are a little too young to have sex? But was a good lemon and a good story about two young teenagers falling in love and having his first time.

Absolutely good wedding.. just sweet and perfect but where are Tsunade? Gaara and Matsuri are little young to date don't you think?

I want Temari to be friends with Tenten.. they can help each other and have lots of fun..

Rock Lee is an amazing guy.. but Gaara is maybe is more awesome.. he decide to change and keep all better.. i admire Gaara so much!

Temari and Naruto have lots stuffs in common.. i rally don't know why Kishimoto can'y see that? She was the perfect woman to our favorite blonde jinchuuriki..

I like this.. but not too much because im not fan of Hinata, Sakura and Ino . But the big part that likes me was so good..

Wow.. the bad thing is Naruto was so young to be marry.. but i like the story..

This look good. Have the three more important things in a fic: Is NaruTema; Have lots of Reviews and in Longer.. simply amazing..