Actually. Maybe write a sequel after you have many more reviews on this. Like from 3k-5k range

Their so cute together _

Wonderful 1st chapter. _

Great story. Read the one with lemons on the other site. Very companionate. A sequal would be very nice. Dude follow the course of shimpudden with the new factors involved. More and more people are reading this story. It's being recognized at a accelerated pace. Screw the ones who are negative about this story, the majority are the ones who like it

Just skimming these chapters as they're all so much rehash with a different angle. There's no story here.

What the hell?! Some of us go throughout life without ever finding love and you toss it around as if it's destined for everyone! Let me tell you, it's not! Not everyone finds someone special. Not everyone finds a soulmate. Not everyone gets to be accepted. It's gotten annoying. Even the most emo bastard of them gets to be loved. Forget annoying ... it's depressing :(

Fucking coward. Put back the lemons in. If the take it down just repost it.

Great story! I really like it. Unlike most arranged marriage fics you went for the hole plot, not just romance or lemons (although lemons are always nice ;)). The only minor thing is the grammar, but compared to Naruto Hatake story, it is almost nonexistent. Way to go, and keep doing it :D

Hey put back the lemons!

you know temarinis 3 years older than naruto

I know one thing gaara will be fine with this

I really like how you've started 's well written, the conversations are very natural and organic and they flow well. Also, the way the council members 'discover' that Naruto is the Leaf's hidden ace in the hole played out really smoothly. Liking it so far.

awsome wow

A sequel can work out. It follows shimpudden accordingly except that tenmari will play out certain roles in the series. Akatsuki see her as someone to use against against Naruto, Danzio getting his hand on their child. She goes to help out in suna while Naruto and the others rescue Gara. Itachi learn that he'll be a uncle. Tenmari helps with the wind training about for Naruto to upgrade his rasengan to wind style. Pein invasion, instead of hinata, I'll be her to defend Naruto while he is incapitated. Pein hurts tenmari to a point, 7 tails arises. I can keep going with this. It can work!

Can't wait for more