Reviews for Cloverfield: The Time of Their Lives
PRKO chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
Great concept and execution in this story. It's couragous, telling the same story from a different postion. Be sure to include all the elements of a Cloverfield monster attack, like decapitated statues, parasites, exploding statues and all that jazz!

Just one general rule of thumb. Put each piece of dialouge in a new paragraph instead of just one big one. Other than that, well done, and good luck!
ManaManaChan chapter 6 . 1/10/2009
I love it! Please continue!
SilverRoseThorns chapter 6 . 8/30/2008
Awesome couple of chapters. Update soon!
voyagerofdoom chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
Its a really interesting story, seeing that its taking a view point from pre-teens and no camera. I hope you continue this!