Reviews for Honor and Cruelty
Claire Hayasaka chapter 4 . 8/22/2008
Wow! Good mysterious intro, and seamless transitions. I also like the title, which seems to reflect the two title characters. I eagerly await the next chapter!D
DarkBluexx chapter 4 . 8/22/2008
Definitely not Mary-Sues... or at least not so far. ;) I like how the separate stories are starting to come together. I also like the way you switch around perspectives in a way that's not confusing to the reader. It's very easy to follow once you get into it and that's a good thing because confusing-ness can be a major turn off, especially when you have an OC-dominating story.

Well, that's all I have to say for now. ) Keep up the good work!

annethewordbender chapter 4 . 8/22/2008
I really like it! it is really good! i hope for more chapters!:D
DarkBluexx chapter 2 . 8/18/2008
Nice start. I like it so far. The characters you have here seem interesting and I enjoyed reading it. You've caught my interest and I look forward to the next chapter!