Reviews for The Unpredictable Wind
uzumakicho chapter 7 . 12/30/2013
The story is coming along very nicely. You're getting a little more confident in your writing and that's a good sign. The action is a little difficult to follow at times, but the main points are good. I'd recommending stuff but I'm only at 7 so I'll wait to get caught up. Thank you for your hard work
Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
I ave 2 admit, i didn't lyk ur story at 1st cause i tot it was childish n d worst story i have ever read but as it progressed, it got more matured n entertaining. I was hooked. Now, i definitely love it. U just ave 2 work on d fight n romance scenes n u'll b good 2 go. Pls, update quickly.
manny1000 chapter 21 . 5/20/2013
I liked both of your stories but it sucks that you stopped making them when they getting good
AnitaM17 chapter 21 . 9/9/2012
Aww! I wanna see naruto and hinata get together! When will the next update be up?
annymous chapter 21 . 8/15/2012
Cooooooollllllll! story, a very hard turn from the original. Hope you can continue it. By the way with the recent manga plot sasuke much great still naruto is most the awesome and in you story please keep the balance of it. Hope this story will be continue not been suspended n_n
K chapter 21 . 10/18/2011
It would be interesting to see the end of your Naruto fiction.
jacalman chapter 21 . 8/26/2011
Next chapter plz!
EditorFin chapter 21 . 6/8/2011
Love this story cant wait for the next update if there ever is one which there wont. Oh well
Nycel chapter 21 . 2/12/2011
hay this is great are you going to continue
nine-orcids chapter 21 . 11/4/2010
this is one of the best stories i've read on here! please continue it!
The Gallant Jaraiya chapter 21 . 8/27/2010
hey i rly like this story plz update soon
nyhi chapter 21 . 4/14/2010
very good story cant wait for another update
Oni Kenpachi chapter 21 . 2/17/2010
When are you going to update this story.
ILoveCocoaCookies chapter 21 . 9/26/2009
con plz
Ashans23 chapter 4 . 8/9/2009
I think you should find a Beta reader or someone to correct the way you write the fic... its a really good one but its not really writed correctly im my opinion.. there is a lot of grammatical errors... go see some of Leaf Ranger, Hektols and S'Tarkan's story for reference of how to write a good story XD
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