Reviews for Trying
socococrazy chapter 1 . 11/15/2016
i wasn't sure if I would like the pairing but this was amazing. for someone who wouldn't put them together ever your writing made it realistic enough that it made sense and acknowledge everything before hand. things were awkward weird and uncomfortable and perfect. :) loved the writing definitely a favorite!
ksuzu chapter 1 . 8/4/2016
The first time I read this, it was too sad, so I didn't favorite it. What a mistake. This is gorgeous, and the phrasing and pacing makes it a standout. ;_;
Guest chapter 1 . 2/26/2016
anne chapter 1 . 7/26/2015
that was really good. thanks for the read.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/27/2015
NejiHina é vida.
ChoppingBoard chapter 1 . 3/23/2015
very nicely written. good job on pacing the development of romantic feelings between the two :)
Guest chapter 1 . 12/20/2014
i love this fic...i so love nejihina romance story
El Reino chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
This was so freaking beautiful. I wish I had more to say, something better but I don't know... I read this before and after my class this afternoon and I remember being so sad but so hopeful throughout the whole thing. Your writing is very beautiful and I remember wondering: "The relationship was already there, why *can't* they fall in love?"

I really appreciate this work, thanks for writing!
LilithiaRW chapter 1 . 5/24/2014
Oh wow this is amazing! I love NejiHina. I realize that in the Naruto-verse the possibility of Hinata being allowed to marry outside the clan is slim, and given Neji's prowess, he could be a candidate for her to marry. So from a realistic point of view of the feudal shinobi countries, this is a power couple!
Sarah chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
This was really beautiful. Everyone was in character and I could totally see this scenario and how Neji's and Hinata's emotions and coming to terms played out. Loved it.
Violetta-Night Butterfly chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful!

I love how natural and sweet this is for Neji and Hinata. So cute and... Real for lack of better world lol

Excellent job it's amazing. :)
SatinemoOn chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
It was well written :) Keep Up the good work!
haru mitsui chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
i want to thank you for writing this beautiful piece. it got me thinking hard about their predicament and i got to understand how a couple in their place would feel and deal with the situation. thank you :)

feels kinda obsolete for just discovering your wonderful fiction. keep writing, you made my day :D
een nihc chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
Such a lovely story. I love how they deal with their grief and slowly find their redemption in each other. Lovely work here.
Greyscale Tragedy chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
Lovely story :) I'm a big fan of Neji/Hina and I like how this is done right. My favorite part:

After that, they tried to train again, but neither of them put much force behind the blows. When she broke through his defenses yet again, she pressed a kiss into his throat instead of the punch that would have brought him down. The kiss turned out to be just as effective. He dropped to the ground.

"Unfair," he panted.

For some reason, it struck her as hilarious. She laughed until her sides ached. She went weak with laughter and dropped beside him. She pulled him down with her as she laughed, and something tight in her chest finally eased. They made love for the first time under the trees.

There's this loveliness to your prose. I love I love!
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