Reviews for Emmett's Irritation
nielanut chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
very cute!
Orions-eyes chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
I love Emmett! Great one-shot! You are such an amazing author - everything you do is wonderful! Thanks for sharing your talent!
dlhk chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
so funny. No offense to Jake as I know it isn't his fault, but that would have been seriously so annoying for the vamps to have him around all the time, doting on nessie and never leaving them alone. I loved this. I love that Emmett made a bet to try to get rid of Jake. I loved that they held out so long that everyone ended up wandering off. I loved that FINALLY, bella had had enough and took Nessie off for herself. That was perfect. I really felt in BD that what was missing was time that Bella, Edward, and Nessie could have to themselves. I loved that you did it. It is THEIR child, after all. Great job. -mommyofboth
not done baking chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
This was really cute, loved the way you ended it.
BlackKeys09 chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
I had always wondered why Rose had never asked Emmett to do anything in the book..this was typical Emmett fashion..perfect.
OCDtwilighter chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
This is really funny- though I think that Emmett's mind would be a little more...boisterous? You should definitely write a sequel!
wtvoc chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
i love emmett. arm wrestling is gold! see? a great idea, wonderfully executed BB!
booksickle chapter 1 . 8/18/2008

I could see that happening.

And "Hurricane Rosalie"... how fitting.
bug2001 chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
LOL! Great one-shot. One beef I had in Breaking Dawn was how Bella seemed to have no rights to her child after she was born ... Jacob was always taking her from her ... hello, I get that Jacob imprinted or whatever but Renesmee is Bella's child. My point of that little rant is that I loved the ending of this where Edward & Bella took the baby to their cottage on their own ... so Jacob can just put that in his juice box and suck it. Ha. :)
XxDracoMalfoy'sGirlxX chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
Awesome! 4 hours. I think Orse is PMSing, even though she is a vampire.
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