|Reviews for Olympics 2008!|
| Spider-Monkey-Forever chapter 3 . 9/19/2008
update. por favor?
| RLD Flame-point Callie-co chapter 4 . 9/8/2008
Still good, I like the two chapters you've added since I last read. Bella and Alice's game was funny. Only thing I have to pick on, you misspelled 'Neiman Marcus'. I'm sure that, if you're a guy, you did it by accident, but being a girl I have to correct you.
Also, the 'fluff' was fine, well-written and not puke-inducing gooey at all. Just keep going like you are and I can't wait for the next update!
| GryffindorPrincess23 chapter 4 . 8/31/2008
Please update soon I need good writing to keep me motivated!
| edwardismybff chapter 3 . 8/20/2008
| GryffindorPrincess23 chapter 2 . 8/19/2008
The Cullens the Olympics hilarity! Update soon!
| RLD Flame-point Callie-co chapter 2 . 8/19/2008
Vampires going to watch the Olympics, hilarious idea! The only thing I saw that could be improved was when you described Bella's wardrobe as 'selective'; repeating that twice just looked a little off. Sorry if that sounds nitpicky, it's only a suggestion.