Reviews for A Visit to School
Sarcastic Musician chapter 1 . 10/18/2011

Okay so I have to say this story is amazing, I didn't see any mistakes and it flowed really well. I think it'd be a shame for this to go unfinished so I'm going to plead for you to continue. I don't have the best ideas but maybe one of these will help:

could do one from Illeana's POV of this same chapter

2. you could set the next chapter at lunch and have those guys making Karsh jealous (this is my favorite idea, I'm a sucker for jealousy)

3. you could do it in one of the other guys' point of view.

There are plenty of options please considering continuing if you aren't at the moment. :D
TWitches Fan chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Soo cutee! Best couple ever! Awsome storyyyy! 98989898989898989898989898989 stars out of 10
Figaro7 chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
this was good

you could have a chapter about from her piont of view or them talking after class.