Reviews for Going for the Gold
anuddaone chapter 8 . 9/30/2008
this is quickly becoming my fave story...

love swimmer edward...such a sweet kiss...

great chapter! Can't wait to read more
acirelemagne chapter 8 . 9/30/2008
gah...that was fab.

i love how he is taking control of his life and she was his catalyst.

oh and i can't wait until he gets in her pants.
Eyes.To.The.Sun chapter 8 . 9/30/2008
Great job on another chapter! I can't wait for the next one : ).

(And I absolutely love Rob as the manager (;)
dlhk chapter 8 . 9/30/2008
as I said, I LOVE this chapter. From the whacky naked wedding dream, to the late night phone call, to the eye contact in the stands, to the disrobing, to the wet and dripping EDWARD. ESPECIALLY FOR THE WET AND DRIPPING EDWARD. And the almost kiss. and the REAL kiss. ESPECIALLY FOR THE REAL KISS. You are awesome. seriously. I'm so excited about VR too. it is going to be epic w/ you and halo writing it. -mommyofboth
BlueBanana-94 chapter 8 . 9/30/2008
Update soon please..ur story s amazng!
Alice laughed chapter 8 . 9/30/2008
...My brain was firing at about a million times faster than it normally did and all I could process was, “wet muscles,”...

Yes yes yes. That's entirely awesome.
MyriadProBold chapter 8 . 9/30/2008
I'm really enjoying this story. Please update soon.
imma vampire chapter 8 . 9/30/2008
gah! I love waking up, checking email and seeing THIS as a "Good Morning" wake up call! AHH! Freakin' yes!

I'm sorry, usually I'm a b*tch and half in the mornings but today, after reading that, I'm totally giddy so I'm all off balance and confused. haha. anyway, the tea kettle just squealed so I'll be going now, but fabulous chapter. I simply cannot wait for another one. I love the progress they are making.


OH! and I forgot, congrates on taking up Volterra Rocks! I really enjoy that story and was sad to see she wouldn't be able to finish it. I'm a big fan of her other stories as well but I'm glad she picked authors to finish them. Can't wait to see what you do with it. :D


Ariel Robyn

Imma Vampire
Cristygen chapter 8 . 9/30/2008
Finally got a chance to read the update.

Hm, Carlisle definitely knows about Edwards intentions! And looks like he is happy for him! I'm so glad for that!

And they kissed! YEAH! Now I'm afraid about what might happen with Bella after that talk with Alice. Bella better not freak out and end things!

Can't wait for more!
oxsvcullenox555 chapter 8 . 9/30/2008
tnuccio chapter 8 . 9/30/2008
he he he ...I loved it. It was great...

Hurry Tami hurry!
brittybee93 chapter 8 . 9/30/2008
LOVED THIS CHAPTER! Edward is so adorable when he is around Bella. Can't wait for an update :)
aliaslover14 chapter 8 . 9/30/2008
Hehehe very steamy chapter!

I think the thing I am most looking forward to, is the swimming lessons. Those are going to be awesome...
HokieGrl00 chapter 8 . 9/30/2008
I hope the next chapter is up soon! So good!
obssd-reader chapter 8 . 9/30/2008
m this was good. Sexy Edward in a swim suit with drops of water cascading nice...thank you.

And the sweet yet so hot.

Yea for you and Halo doing VR :)

I love this story so much, it's like living the Olympics all over. Good times, Good times!
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