Reviews for Going for the Gold
Starshinedown chapter 5 . 9/15/2008
O. Edward's breaking rules. With Bella! Yey!

It's funny, I've read about how many calories a day Phelps takes in, and I've boggled over it, since it's about 10 times what I ought to be taking in, but until your story, I never really pictured in my head how much food that actually _is_. Jeezy creezy.

Your story has a lovely pace to it. Keep up the good work!
bethann2103 chapter 5 . 9/15/2008
That chapter was GOLD! I loved the tender moments it was s0 cute and romantic! thanks for the awesome chapter!
WeasleyWeakness chapter 5 . 9/15/2008
Oh. Angsty gift olympian Edward. I love.
aliaslover14 chapter 5 . 9/15/2008
Ah a very steamy swim lesson is in their future...
wewillbethehopeful chapter 4 . 9/14/2008
This is really good :D

Update son! :)
dlhk chapter 4 . 9/13/2008
holy wonderfullness! I'm so excited. I can't believe he was brave enough to ask her to dinner. that is awesome. i can't wait to see what happens next. Yay! you are so incredible boo boo. Your writing is like gold or platinum or something. I'm still on a shivering, quivering high from your ch 18. i've read that crazy chapter like, 4 times already. m. I love this story too, of course, but you haven't gotten to the ch 18 stuff yet. Hopefully it won't take these two too long. lol. -mommyofboth
Sarkule chapter 4 . 9/13/2008
its awesome! i loves it!

can't wait for the next chapter!
emkath chapter 4 . 9/12/2008
so after just finishing turning dust into gold, i had to read this story as soon as i could! i absolutely love it, you are both fantastic writers and i cant wait to see what happens next. please update soon!
Bluesberryangel chapter 4 . 9/12/2008
I love, love, love this. It's great! Keep up the good team work and please update soon!
hopelesslyAddicted215 chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
This is SUCH a cool fanfiction! Even cooler because I was lucky enough to go to Beijing and see the Olympics live! Please update soon! You left me hanging off a cliff...
dlhk chapter 3 . 9/12/2008
so... how much do I love you? A LOT! I just read this again so I could review it since the first time I read it was on vacay on the blackberry. It was so hilarious. I loved the flashback of Bella in her gold bikini. That was priceless. I love that this time Bella is friends w/ the whole gang and Edward is the one who is looking from the outside. I can't wait to read more from this story. (I've already read 4, I just am pretending I didn't for the sake of the review. lol) -mob
dlhk chapter 2 . 9/11/2008
duh... Jacob is so annoying. I'm glad that Edward was able to control himself and just walk away. I love where this story is going. I read it awhile ago, but wanted to make sure to review it. I love your style and your attention to detail. Great job. -mommyofboth
dlhk chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
ohmygosh... this story is amazing! I love it and can't wait to see how it all plays out. -mommyofboth
MissNebraskaLIVE chapter 4 . 9/11/2008
Gah. I love this. I found it on Twilighted but I'm SO EXCITED that it's on !

I am pretty much going to suffer intensely if you don't update soon. Please?
Abasketcase chapter 3 . 9/11/2008
I just realized that Bella will see Eddie-poo eat in chapter 5. I hope he orders bucketloads and bucketloads! But I have a request... could you please! PLEASE! update soon. like when i get home from school. I have a math test today and it would really take my mind of the fact that I failed if this story updates... thanks so much.
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