Reviews for Going for the Gold
Cristygen chapter 6 . 9/19/2008
A whole week with Edward! That's a dream come true! Hmm, Esme does seem to know. Mother knows best. ;)

Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
Capricorn75 chapter 6 . 9/19/2008
Oh good, I was afraid Prickdaddy- I mean, Carlisle- was going to insist on Jessica Rabbitt!
jbluvs2sing chapter 6 . 9/19/2008
I was wondering how you guys were going to get them together all the time with Carlisle, Esme, and Rob around. Great chapter! Can't wait til more!
CallistoLexx chapter 6 . 9/19/2008
Oh, this was beyond excellent, Boo! There are no words. Edward gets to spend time with Bella without having to sneak around to do it. This is just...dude, there are no words. I loved it.
aliaslover14 chapter 6 . 9/19/2008
Heheh great plot twist!
anuddaone chapter 6 . 9/19/2008
This is so good! Love your swimmer edward...

His attitude in this chapter feels very right!

Can't wait to read more!
ScarlettLetters chapter 5 . 9/18/2008
Just read all 5 chapters. This will be a fun story although reading that Tanya was Rose's partner made me a little nervous. Foreshadowing? Edward and tats...very nice!
irishgirl32 chapter 5 . 9/18/2008
AMAZINGNESS! You both are wonderful and oh my goodness I am so glad I came across this story I absolutly love it and cant wait to read more
imma vampire chapter 5 . 9/17/2008

how often are your guys' updates? because this story is already on my top five favorites. I mean it. It's well written and whitty and well thought out. And it's about Olympic Swimmers! haha.

Anyway, I can't wait for the next update. so until then I think I'll read your other stories. :D

-Ariel Robyn
imma vampire chapter 4 . 9/17/2008


good chapter! I loved the set up for a more personal conversation between Bella and edward. I can't wait to read the next chapter!


-Ariel Robyn
imma vampire chapter 3 . 9/17/2008
oh my gosh that is just too funny. I want to go to a party like that. That would probably make my life feel complete... Though I should probably refresh my starwars knowledge since last time I watched any of them, I was like 11 and fell asleep in the theater. :p

great chapter. on to the next. :D

-ARiel Robyn
imma vampire chapter 2 . 9/17/2008
ah bril! So Jake is like the French. egging on the Americans. lol. Is Emmett on the American team? I hope so. He could be that big dude who totally won that relay. oh man that was beautiful.

haha I watched the olympics like crazy. I love me my michael. :D

fabby job. Going to read more now.


-Ariel Robyn
imma vampire chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
oh my gosh! this is like taking Michael Phelps, Edward Cullen and the sexy sport and enticing excitment of the Olympics, mixing it all together and baking them in love muffins a'la fan fiction story! :O


Because Michael/Edward sexy love muffins are my favorite kinds. ;)

on to the next!

-Ariel Robyn
dlhk chapter 5 . 9/16/2008
oh, I loved this chapter. I loved that Edward just ordered one of everything on the menu unless it involved shrimp. Too funny. I don't like shrimp either, but my hubby does. I can't believe that he can eat that much. I loved that they didn't treat it like an interview, and instead just spent the time getting to know each other better. I especially thought it was awesome that Bella's biggest fear is of the water and that Edward volunteered to teach her how to swim. classic. I was glad that Edward was more forward than I expected him to be. yay! I can't wait for more from those two. -mommyofboth
crzylady chapter 5 . 9/16/2008
oh! I completely spaced reviewing the other chapters because I was enjoying myself so much :) Felt bad for poor Eric and can't wait for more Emmett. And now I'm really hungry for Chinese food. looking forward to updates
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