|Reviews for Barricade|
| Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 2 . 1/21/2013
| Team Major Whitlock chapter 12 . 1/20/2013
I loved it
| LuVsKy101 chapter 12 . 5/27/2012
omg i thought paul and finoa was going to die wow that was awsome
| BlackRosesNeverDieXOXO chapter 12 . 12/8/2011
UGH! I'm almost crying. Tears of joy and tears or sorrow. Sorrow because they almost effing died. NOT COOL! Tears of joy because they lived happily ever after.
| LynnLautner chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
I think this is great!
| gabycaldemeraz chapter 5 . 9/21/2010
Apparently Collin and Seth have NO love for their live's safety SPECIALLY COLLIN..
he's jealous over him making her laugh! I LOVE THIS MAN!
"even if" ..." even if"... SNIFF, SNIFF... :*(
o_O.. WHAT! horrible!.. poor Fiona! ...
| gabycaldemeraz chapter 4 . 9/21/2010
I just noticed how she actually "seems" like a forest Fairy inside the tree hollow.. AND I absolutely LOVE that you wrote it in Paul's POV.. I always appreciate stories more when they are in the guys POV and of course the fact that the writing is really good :)
just to see the expression on her face! lets see how that will work for hi in later chapters LOL
hahaha i honestly cant let it go, I love it too much.. he talks to about her like she was 5 years old, "this little girl".
shes perfectly stubborn, perfect for him! uuugggh I want to read the entire story in two seconds! I LOVE IT!
COCKY IDIOT! ahahahah
i can imagine the sweet conversation " I love you, Im in love with you and I will hunt you down if you try to run away".. errr somehow it doesnt really sound the way I wanted it to LOL!
the love OOZES through his words: "Too fucking bad," I barely choked out, "because I'm not going to fucking let you go.".. "I fucking love you. Don't you ever forget that."
is it extremely weird that i can actually sense the sweetness he means and that it actually makes me love HIM more?
And, I was terribly selfish. .. awww he's such a kid, but honsty goes a long way right?.. i know I keep making up excuses for him..
ok seriously though.. poor Paul, it hurts me seeing him like that, and knowing he hurts when he "hurts" her... I really want to see her Love him, he is gonna be so happy and maybe will stop saying " f*ck" so f*cking much :P.. ohhh CANT WAIT!
when she speaks to him, I actually imagine her voice very Fairy like, soft and sweet and innocent like a forest nymph.. so opposite Paul in that aspect ( the physical aspect, but inside they're are both stubborn and hurt,angry and confused.. THEY NEED EACH OTHER!)
" couldn't you attempt it anywhere else?" Really Paul? that's how you want to start over? what kind of a question is that?... moron.. Plus, by North does she mean she's a star? a fallen star? she is tiny and silvery.. Im kidding, Im just REALLY enjoying her giving Paul hard time, specially when its not on purpose :P
loved his humor on magic.. and "a doll" he is ADORABLE
WAIT.. her favorite song.. is there a possibility that.. I.. was... right ?
his song.. he is a dumbass
I swear MINE too.. for the same reasons
ok.. Im officially scared :s
.. GREAT writing.. her sadness through Pauls eyes is killing me
| gabycaldemeraz chapter 3 . 9/21/2010
charms? He is so gloriously full of himself! LOL.. love it! i dont love that he is smug.. I love that he is frustrated. so cute! he would probably flip and say "f that!" if he was called cute, which would make him even CUTER! LOL
I. have. MELTED. gggaaaaaaaaaaahhh i love him when he gets protective!
i honestly still SMILE everytime he mentions how tiny she is "miniature print".. you are such a cool writer!
"Because I love you." , he's so beautiful.. its REALLY straight forward an creepy yes, but BEAUTIFUL non the less
I absolutely adore that he is so passionate.. some would say extrimist but I say passionate... he's either ANGRY with all his might or LOVING with all his heart.. Sexy Paul doesnt do anything halfway ;)
:( ... it hurts him so much! :(... PAIN Mikasi sounds like Pauls opposite.. but I KNOW Paul has a beautiful soul.. im just saying thats what it would look like int he outside.. I forgot to comment that i laughed so hard when he said that MIkasi was such a cowardly name ..
| gabycaldemeraz chapter 2 . 9/21/2010
Your paul is perfect. He has the bad temper of a child but the heart of a man. I love how he is jealous, how he scolded her, wants to kiss her, make her happy, screams at her, scares her and tells her he loves her All in probably ten minutes. And how smug and cocky is he? Lol! I love my moronic paul!
I like her silver hair and that even emily's clothes are huge on her... Cant wait for him to hug her and hold her. :)
| gabycaldemeraz chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
I have no idea why id never seen this story before.. But oh wow.. My heart pained for her, specially when she smiled.. :(
And i loved how paul went bipolar: angry at jake, happy at imprinting and Pissed at her for doing that. Plus, adored all the fairy, tiny person... Etc. i can tell ill cry and fall even More inlove with paul...
| pnkrchik chapter 12 . 8/30/2010
Oh my gosh this story had me crying so much. Especially this last chapter, how they pulled through it together, I swear I was full on happy sobbing, and we all know how awkward that is hahaha. I loved it! This story was amazazing
| Insane Cali Gurl chapter 12 . 5/9/2010
okau please excuse the language ahead of time...but...That was such a fuckin fabulous story! OMFG! I thought for sure they were going to die or be turned into vampires or just something equally as horrible! Wow I love Paul/OC stories and this was by far one of the BEST i've read! Good work!
| faithy waithy chapter 12 . 4/14/2010
Really good story. I loved to read it.
| Gina olivia chapter 5 . 3/25/2010
Is it bad that all I can do is sing Rihanna's "I don't wanna be... a murderer..." lol
| zodiacgem01 chapter 12 . 12/16/2009
loved it so sweet at the end