Reviews for Elegiac
nunslace chapter 4 . 6/13/2009
this story is so dark, i can't believe it. lol. I LOVE IT!
Aeris Rommyu chapter 4 . 6/6/2009
I really enjoyed this fanfic! It was so original (yes, I know the Little Mermaid is not your own). But what you did with Twilight, seems like it is hardly Twilight anymore (in a good way though). I extremely loved this fanfiction and i can't wait to read more from you! Though I can't think of why you chose this title.
Melodramatic-Mo chapter 4 . 5/18/2009
oh i lovvedd this story!

edward was a little scary

but there was something about it that

kept me reading! could you PLEASE PLEASE make

a sequel or something to this one? the curiosity

is eating me up of what happens next!

-Mo
1LovesLatin3 chapter 4 . 5/17/2009
WOW... that was interesting... im not sure what to say...

i really liked your story. it was an origional concept, i loved the whole warped The Little Mermaid idea.
InkHeart17 chapter 4 . 4/23/2009
Well gee, that was a cheery ending... Haunting and beautiful love story you have here. I adore it!
InkHeart17 chapter 2 . 4/23/2009
Okay, so I was shocked when I hadn't realized that Jacob was going to be the human Prince. And ha! Alice and Jasper are Flotsom and Jetsom! That garden scene was creepy. The fashion you dressed Edward's human form in reminded me of Jareth from Labyrinth; another menacing and sexy image. Don't tell me Edward's orchestrated the whole thing so that Bella is going to forcibly belong wholly to him. His malice is delicious but I am REALLY scared for Bella!
InkHeart17 chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
OH shiver! This is incredible. Little Mermaid is the best and I love it with a Twilight twist. And oh malicious Edward (with tentacles!) is the epitome of sexy! My god I must read more! I'm inwardly screaming since I can't do it aloud as others around me are sleeping, but trust me, it's very fangirlish.
Qualia Des chapter 4 . 4/10/2009
You've been one of my favourite authors for many a year now, and upon reading this, I am once again reminded of your great writing prowess!

Loved the story, and I loved how you made ol' Eddy evil rather than good- makes him less campy, IMHO. The only bad thing I can think of about this fic is the lack of tentacle porn-COME ON!, you had such a golden opportunity here! D:

Keep up the kickass work! :)
InuyashaFan chapter 4 . 3/10/2009
overdue, because i read this awhile ago, lol. But great job! This whole story was amazing, and the ending did not disappoint. The only thing I'm sad about is that it did have to come to an end... *sniffle*

No, but seriously, great job! As always you have amazed! -

Mandy
Hawkins chapter 4 . 3/3/2009
This story was amazing, far superior to the Disney version. I'll have to go read the Hans Christian Anderson version now.

You're an amazing writer.
Mochou chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
Amazing story.
CateT chapter 4 . 2/18/2009
Wow, this story was really cool - I loved how you rewrote the myth like that, intertwining the stories! Keep up the awesometastic work! ;)
perpetually chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
Awesome story. Please check out my newly written story 'Thirteen Bites' but it does have lemons in it. If you don't like lemons then read 'She's the One In Control' or 'Qualm of Remorse' all up on my profile. Thanks and all the best! Lovely story! Brilliant effort.
HungryLikeTheWolf19 chapter 4 . 1/31/2009
Wow, this story is probably one of my all-time favorite fanfictions of all time. I love the evil Edward, you almost never see that. It was also a great ending. I loved this story. It was so dynamic and complicated, but everything came together flawlessly. Props to you.
thebestAUTHOR chapter 4 . 1/15/2009
I must say you are an amazingly talented writer, and this story kept me drawn the entire time! Dark Edward was great! Perfect, I love reading about him every once and a while, but then I'll go back to reading normal Edward fics (or books). The only thing I don't get is what you said about there being only darkness in Bella's future, I doesn't make that much sense to me. Didn't Edward say he and Bella only matched because he held both halves of their dark souls, and Bella both halves of their light souls? (I know that probably didn't make the most of sense, but you know what I mean.) The ending was perfect, and it left of well as well. But if you decide to write more, I'll be right here waiting! (P.s, did you ever think about writing a book? You should consider it, your talents are amazing!)
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