Reviews for The Seme in Semeku
holyscythe chapter 1 . 12/28/2017
well this was a bit diffrent from how miygai act normaly and his friend.
i did like this story, it were well writen and i can could not see any spelling mistakes.
have a nice day. from a fan.
JeslynBoo chapter 1 . 10/16/2016
Honestly, I have read worse things done to characters in non- canon OOC doujinshi BY ORIGINAL MANGAKAS (well, ok, really one in particular seems to have a thing for non-con/incest... not my favorite!) I'm beyond ok with playing in "What If" landhaving a little silly/sexy fun- I just prefer that the characters are, in fact, having a good, nobody-gets-hurt time. My favorite part of this one may be the fluffy bonding at the end, but I applaud you for pushing yourself to go outside your comfort zone, too!
epicvision299 chapter 1 . 7/4/2015
LOL "You don'the work in the office nor in the bed!"
TristonKitsune chapter 1 . 11/13/2014
Damn! This is incredible!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
There was too much plit with my porn. But really I liked this story.
Broken-Scarlet18 chapter 1 . 6/14/2014
RoastPigeon chapter 1 . 3/2/2014
Woah, I remember reading this fic a long time ago. I forgot to fave it and I lost track of it completely and now that I took my time to find it again, I'm glad I did Best junjou smut ever. It's even better because I like both couples.
musme chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
I like it
lovekyman chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
i'm a bit speechless...LOVED THIS 100% although i do think it was too much for hiro, but you did an awesome job on this fic totally loved it.

shinobu is so sneaky, drugged miyagi, i wonder how that'll go. lol keep writing this was great! :D
soraceli chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
it was perfect!
RoxanneTheGreat chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
Rofl I bet he will be aching for weeks!XD
My0wnlittleworld247 chapter 1 . 11/10/2012

I'd firstly just like to say that being a plot whore isn't necessarily a bad thing. I usually prefer shorter stories to longer ones, but I'm really glad you took the time to write a proper story, because that in itself helps the characters stay in character, rather than just "hurr durr, let's have sex".

I loved the fact that you drew everything out, rather than having one sex scene that's over in five minutes. There are so many of them these days, it's becoming painful to sift through the crap.

I personally think you did a good job of keeping the characters in character, except for maybe when Nawaki became a little more sadistic, but that can't be helped. And at the end, when Hiroki was all forgiving and accommodating... that just didn't sit right with me.

All in all though, I thought it was a well thought out story, with good grammar, except for a few typos, and a well rounded conclusion.

And finally, as a side note, I know I'm weird and all for even making a note of this, let alone telling you, but I really liked this sentence: '"Kamijou…" Miyagi's eye twitched. "I'm pretty sure… that in this sort of situation… you're supposed to choose between the two of us, and I'm fairly certain that if I were sober, you weren't drugged up on some aphrodisiac, and he- well… his choice obviously wouldn't differ… but if we were all in our normal mind-sets, I'm fairly certain we'd all agree that you belong with the Amazon."'

... Just something about that was really well written, so I thought I'd let you know, because I know I personally like it when someone else acknowledges when I've done good.

Anyway, I hope you're happy with this, I usually don't write anymore than a sentence as a review, and here I am writing a whole essay...

TeitoMcklein chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
itaessue chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Still processing all the happened right now. It was pretty mind-blowing indeed. I laughed at miyagi's dialogue so much, thinking how spot on it was. You characterized him brilliantly. Flawlessly really. And as super crazed out this plot was, I can't help but think the probability of this as it accurately fits them so well. Nowaki's resistance and possessive nature throughout their rendezvous. Miyagi's witty humor, and having him release his full flooded dual personality. And simply Kamijou's pride despite his situation . This also probably the longest I ever commented something, and a lemon fic at that. But I'm still amazed how no matter how filthily lemon ridden that story was, it maintained its character and wittyness throughout .
The Hiccup Pup chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Holy #$%&*()(*&%$# !
This is the first lemon I've ever read. And GOOD GOD I loved it. If this how the rest are written then I would read 'em all. I love love love the Egoist couple. And Miyagi was so perfectly in character. I could imagine him saying all those lines.
Btw the fluff in the final scene was totally one of those die-on-fluff kinds. Well done.
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