|Reviews for The Things I can't say!|
| SangLune chapter 11 . 3/22/2011
Just found this story and its great please continue!
| Kay8abc chapter 11 . 12/31/2010
What is up with this mysterious drug abs? I really love the mystery thou
| LightKeira chapter 11 . 12/30/2010
Excellent twist ABS seamed like such a cheap fix
also here are the spelling mistakes I've spotted
line 1 "presence"
line 5 "days" (no apostrophe)
line 8 "tea"
line 16 "tea"
line 27 "too" (in this context)
line 28 "spoke"
line 29 "add"
addtionaly on line 27 did you mean "but it was true"
oh and happy new years :)
| Guest chapter 11 . 12/30/2010
Yay! I am so happy that you updated : )...I love your story, it's awesome I can't wait to find out what's going on...so when Ivy like touched Rachel, she woke up? Totally cool : }
| cookiesforfrogs chapter 10 . 12/26/2010
Yay for updates. :-) looking forward to more soon.
| LightKeira chapter 10 . 12/22/2010
on line 13 you misspelt "pulse" and on line 28 you misspelt "worse". otherwise an intresting direction can't wait to see where you're going with this.
| Kay8abc chapter 10 . 12/24/2009
Well it seems they got themselves into another batch of trouble. So far so very good. I can't wait to see just what this drug is and does.
| LightKeira chapter 9 . 10/6/2009
Like the plot so far but it can be hard to understand at times so I would suggest looking for a beta reader to help with your spelling/grammar ;)
Keep it up.
| DearHeart89 chapter 9 . 10/5/2009
OK...I loved it, even though I don't know whats coming, I loved it, i'm so glad that you're still writing...It bummed me out when I came to the end...I can't wait for more, keep up the great work : )
| Neopolar chapter 8 . 10/4/2009
I like the story, its good very interesting
| DearHeart89 chapter 8 . 8/28/2009
great work, I absolutely can't wait for more...oh and I don't like the ghostboy either
| Shawntail chapter 3 . 8/22/2009
...we really use those a lot?
good chapter, bit confusing because off the lack of those speaking marks thingies ... but it was good
| Shawntail chapter 2 . 8/22/2009
well...that run went smoothly
BUT that makes things more interesting for us
job well done
| Shawntail chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
Hello fellow-Belgian ;)
liked the first chapter and now I'm curious ...
*waves and walks towards the next chapter*
| DearHeart89 chapter 7 . 7/17/2009
I love where it's going :)...do you know how many chpaters you'll be making?