Reviews for The Will of Destiny
1sunfun chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
alexabeamer chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
I loved this, especially, "It was as if he knew that Destiny had laid different plans from his own and the very concept were offensive to him. As if he knew he had to accept what She had already forced on him and had decided that from that moment, he would accept no more." That was perfect for Naruto. His determination and spirit are unprecedented, and I think you captured the sense of that in those two lines.
demonicnargles chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
Another nice one shot. I really like it.

As I said before, you are fucking awesome. I'll be waiting for your next Naruto work, or the next chapter of An Unforseen Consquence, which I read and reviewed some time ago.

undeadyeti chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
very well written thank you for sharing this with the site
JovialShogun chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
Great story... I think it does a really good job of expressing Neji's feelings. And I really like the hint that Naruto becomes Hokage. :)
DarkDecember93 chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
I like it.

I like the way you describe feelings and 's really great.

Don't worry about the end...I never finished my stories even if I wrote many stories on notebooks.

Keep working because it's good.
jere7782 chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
Good story!