|Reviews for The Deadliest Poison|
| sbm chapter 1 . 11/1/2017
I think you over exaggerated the lethality of demonic chakra, even if it was described as something similar in the series. I've seen anyone actually die - in the whole series - because they were struck by demonic chakra. Those two cloud brothers got eaten by the fox, survived in a corrosive environment and gained the Fox's power by taking that "lethal poison" into their own bodies.
| wolfbane chapter 1 . 9/27/2015
could have been interesting if it was stretched out into a full story.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
dose he ever get told neji died? i mean really he should be told but nice story
| TheDaemonthor chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
that was amazing
as were all your other stories that I've favourited in the past few hours, however I have held off reviewing so as not to appear sycophantic in my praise of you
| Writing bunny chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
Good one. I can see things going like this.
| Ben chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
Read the remake first and liked elements of both, but if he was totally unaware he would have killed his team in training and practice sparing matches... A sentence added saying Kalashnikov instructed him to never relieve chakra during training would fix that issue.
| nipnag chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
well, even if there are some loopholes in it i still like the darkness of this one shot.
| S1R chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
| Mr.Destructo chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
i laughed so much while reading this awesome story _
| SethFC chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
This fic would have made an awesome dark/evil Naruto story personally. But even in its current form its awesome.
| Lord of Murder chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
wow thats a bit depressing but a rather interesting ability.
| Violet Shadows chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
Interesting, but again a bit weak in the end.
| Hijokugei chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
How'd he right it if he had DIED?
Still, really, scarily dark.
| Stygian Styx chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
wow... That was very dark. Good, but very dark.
| silvertv chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
hmm, yeah kinda dark, but it fits well with the story. Great idea though with the demonic chakra being a poison, great work! wish i could be more constructive sorry.