Reviews for A Marauder's Daughter
A.W chapter 40 . 4/22
I really enjoyed this! There were quite a lot of grammatical errors and things like that, but it was still excellent and entertaining.
Jojo15.01.1974 chapter 40 . 1/17
Good story, well done x
The Ghostly Minion chapter 30 . 9/23/2016
25 typos and about that many punctuation gaffs.

TGM
The Ghostly Minion chapter 29 . 9/23/2016
13 easy to correct typos, and a similar number of punctuation errors.

TGM
Alytiger chapter 6 . 5/26/2016
How is putting the pieces together not going to be the easiest thing? Her name is Hermione, she's Harry's best friend, she's a Lion...
Alytiger chapter 4 . 5/26/2016
Ummmmmm, Not sure if you know this, but everything is underlined in this chapter. You should probably fix it.
Alytiger chapter 1 . 5/26/2016
Is her mom Remus' sister or something?
acetwolf94 chapter 40 . 4/19/2016
I LOVE IT!
RosaConnor12 chapter 12 . 4/9/2016
I loved this chapter especially the Titanic reference awesome job!
ReinaReynaRaina chapter 40 . 4/2/2016
I wanted it to be Dramione. *pouts* It was a very good story. I think it was sort of choppy and rushed. And the cancer thing was dragged out far too long. Other than that, I liked your plot line.

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ReinaReynaRaina
heartsandbows chapter 13 . 3/30/2016
this is a good story but I can't help but notice that you have a lot of sentence fragments like in this chapter "...She needs. Sam you need her family..." it just doesn't sound right
baby girl chapter 40 . 1/30/2016
wonderful
PugS chapter 6 . 12/26/2015
I lovev it can harry et overprotective of mia?
Lugia'sChallenger13 chapter 5 . 9/28/2015
Oh the chaos of the marauders
Lugia'sChallenger13 chapter 4 . 9/28/2015
You NEED to work on your spelling!
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