Reviews for Chains
Furrina chapter 1 . 1/29/2018
This was hauntingly beautiful. It's perfect silence before devasting storm... like the beautiful scenery in a horror movie... It's so beautiful it cuts just right and takes pieces of ur heart.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/24/2017
so sad yet i loved it.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/11/2017
jay chapter 1 . 1/17/2015
speechless . This was amazing
TheSilentPrincess chapter 1 . 9/3/2014
this was so sad, but yet very beautiful in a way.
suzmac33 chapter 1 . 6/1/2014
Well damn.
Weave the Magic chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
This is so tragically dark. You got me gloomy. :'( thanks for sharing.
E chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
Your story is brilliant absolutely loved it!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
You forgot Paul and Jared.
Oridara chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
"Sam Uley is sitting alone in his living room, talking to nobody.

Everyone (who mattered, at least) is dead. Today he is the leader of no one.

The holocaust is complete."

A air-tight ending to this devastating one-shot. As I read the last lines, there was such a deafening silence resonating in my mind.

"The holocaust is complete", the use of "holocaust" at the end made me look it up already knowing it's meaning from the context it's usually used in. Was the pack a sacrifice completely consumed by fire? For whom? What does the title mean in connection with the last line of the of the one-shot?

How completey devstating for Sam Uley to be the first one phased and the last one standing. He would be the only one to protect against the vampires. He wasn't the last link in the Chains?

Great Work, although depressing that all those beautiful, well-meaning people removed themselves from Earth too willingly.
MargotTenser chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
I loved how this was written. You managed to use the out-of-sequence timeline to tell more than a chronological story would and really build the mood. This Quote really got me:

"There is a bottle of wine beside her bed, alongside the bottle of his dad's old sleeping pills.

Except there's no wine, there are no pills. The bottles are empty."

It was just perfectly stated and brilliant.
ClairWCook chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
I can't even say how much I love this. It's dark, it's powerful;

"It's definitely not glorious, but it's something."
jessica-semnadaprafaze123 chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
I love Darkfic,but this...

it's just fanfucktastic.

I love it.
LightTheWay333 chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
I have one thing to say to you, lady. WOW!
NeverOkayIPromise chapter 1 . 4/30/2011

Well I loved it. A little orbid of me yes but I LOVED IT!

Haha Sam F*** you.

Poor Leah

-"it really doesnt help that she can read his mind"

That was so sad but I'm an angst-girl at heart so I enjoyed it.

Keep writing!

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