Reviews for Smoke
CrypticRebel chapter 1 . 7/23/2016
Adorable :)
Leya Anhaylla chapter 1 . 1/15/2016
Your Shikamaru is surprisingly violent ahah But I love it
Karasu Kagami chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
Shikamaru was thrilled when Naruto merged with Kyuubi. Because not only could the blond now become pregnant (which he was) but because Naruto also gained three fuzzy appendages. Two adorable orange fox-ears and a fuzzy tail.

...what are the 'three fuzzy appendages? I assumed tails until i read 'and a fuzzy tail' im confused...
please clarify?
shadow hedgie chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
aww cool fanfic
TheRoseThatKnowsPain chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
So cute!
Ririchiyo-Chan chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
I love you! lol.. I really like this..
Miki Hoshigami chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
The anniversary is on my Hatching-Day.

I had a spazz out moment when I read that.
marinaxfagundes chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
Ooh, soo cute and funny! I loved it!
hoigui chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
Finally a searies of scentenses that dont have a single sad one int it. THANK YOU!
Iceheart15 chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Loved it!
WereBunny87 chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
Awwwww they make a good couple! And yay MPreg! Good job!
MaroonedInThisBody chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
ITS SO CUTE! i love it!
miss onigiri head chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
aw me and my friend awwed all the way through it, when we were meant to be asleep

good job

missonigirihead and friend

starpiles chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
so wonderfully cute!
Hoeru.GetsugaPantera-obsession chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
Dude! Dude! Dude! Rock Lee! Wha! ...That's actually quite interesting...I will have to persue this. O.o

Heh heh. But the story was really sweet. I enjoyed it.
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