wow this is complication than the canon one just for this horcrux. but well, great chapters. hope u still countinue this. this is Gold!

Interesting, but I don't hold much hope of it ever being finished. Following it, just in case.

Although, it isn’t finished I love to reread this story because it’s just so good. I love the idea of mage Harry who is powerful but still struggles to achieve his goal, of saving as many as he can.
Also, I think it’s hilarious how jealously Draco wants Harry’s attention but fails so hard. Little spider sidekick is also cute.
Thanks for the awesome work so far.

Finally, you should put the fact that this is slash in the summary.

It's not that I dislike slash, even.

It's that you've written the characters as females masquerading as men.

Also, Veela and their descendants are female.
Get your shit together.

Yeah, no thanks.

This is a bit too stupid and needlessly feel-y.

I read Harry Potter because I like the whimsical nature of the world and the characters involved.

This is just a butchery of the setting.

Weird change to Draco's ancestry.

Why, though?

This is an interesting story. I never expected a Hufflepuff version of Harry to have so much hostility towards him.

Love this! Please update soon!

no homo please

I know you don't post here anymore. I haven't heard from you in 7 years so it seems odd to post a review now. However, I still love this story, I read it all the time. I thought of how you were doing and was wondering if you were okay. I hope you are

This started well, then went downhill rapidly. Completely unclear what is actually going on with Harry, which makes it all seem a little specious, a best.

I don't really get what you're writing. The first few chapters were great then suddenly boom Harry became a moronic p.o.s.

Competing with Susan Bones on who flirts better with Justin Finchley? ... Riiight.

Another great moment. I loved your "this note will self-destruct" joke.

Also, before I forget, I want to praise your "Harry as a mage" idea. Until now, every story I've seen with Harry gaining such a distinctive power has left a glaring sense that the author is trying to push aside the feel of HP canon in preference of their "cooler" headcanon but, in this case, some mixture of how you've designed it and how you've written it hasn't given me that feeling.

(I'm sure it's partly that it's a double-edged sword, and technically post-canon, and something anyone could technically attempt if they were just as desperate, and more about Harry's relationship with four non-human OCs who occasionally give him a hand than about Harry having an original power, but that alone isn't enough to keep it from feeling anti-canonical.)

I'm fighting off the tail end of a cold, so I haven't been feeling motivated to think about what I'm reading enough to leave commentary but I have to say it: I love the dynamic you've got developing between Harry, Draco, and the rest of the Slytherins. "Worse, I'll ignore you" is a brilliant bit of writing.