|Reviews for Occam's Razor|
| Morosely chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
This story was mostly brilliant, much more rounded and thought out than most fanfictions are. That being said, the only things that prevent me from falling into a story as good as this one would be grammatic errors and unecessary flourishes in writing. It seems you may have abused the thesaurus a bit because while you use big words in a way that says you know them, you made simple spelling and grammar errors which suggests otherwise: "That through his bully theory out the window" proper word is 'threw'. "Mace hit the table with an open palm, making Capa startle." making Capa 'start' not "startle". Last one i remember is "ex cetera" instead of the proper'et cetera'. just double check your grammar and don't use too many big words where they aren't necessary because sometimes shorter sentences have bigger impact.
| Dr FooFoo chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
Ack, why did it have to end there? :P
I liked this... their chemistry is so complicated but so simple deep down.
| Shagilea chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
i love them! Mace is really cute! )
| Allstarzs chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
that was made of so much epic win i can't even begin to explain it. mace and capa so belong together... their chemistry is just insane. thanks for writting this
| Soot chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
wow wow wow! can;t say more! great story!