Reviews for Out of Darkness
The-Metal chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
Adel X Heather, huh? That's something that I never would have thought of.

But at the same time, it works, doesn't it? And it's very well written!

If you plan on gracing this fic with another chapter, then make haste, because you've got me hooked!
252nd Crysallis chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
This is a K to K fic.

Anywayz, at least it's well written. Heather seems to have a thing for foreigners.
MonaLovely chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
oh this is god! please please PLEASE write more. it's such an original pairing and i do love adel.

oh write more more more!

:) best,

-mona
Ralf Jones chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
Wow!

Finally a Adel/Heather fic!

Please tell me you are gonna update soon!
Marini135 chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
Mostly because Adel makes me lol.

I would've never thought of it o:

Nice
Cutiecat chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
Hm...usually I don't really like Heather ( since she lived instead of Emilio) but somehow, I like this story. Please keep writing! )
Alexa chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
Whoo! On my UTK2 high I happened to notice your fic. I'm actually pretty interested in Adel/Heather.

As for the fic itself, it was very good. There are a few missing commas and periods, but you can easily improve on that. I'm intrigued about the M rating...is this going to be the first UTK2 smutfic?

Great work, can't wait for the next chapter. Keep on writing!
RossiiMustang chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
Wow...that was interesting. please update that! liked it alot.
melsha chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
Hey Jonesy! Nice 2 see tht my part was really big! LOL luvin the story.. u rock girl! Write more and write it fast! WARNING 2 all other ppl she aint 20 or 16 or 17 and i shud no! Shes very small lol over and out
Parsat chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
I expected someone would try this sooner or later. I really liked how you described Heather's struggles over Emilio's loss, and her nightmare.

Also, Tyler annoying Victor is awesome.