|Reviews for A Chimera's Tale|
| inuyashamunkey chapter 10 . 6/7
Hope you update soon~
| OtaOutau chapter 10 . 5/26
this story is so cute I hope you decide to finish it
| GreenCAT the second chapter 10 . 5/15
this story is probably dead, but id love to see a continuation (probs cuz i'm a sick fuck lol)
| Guest chapter 10 . 5/13
I love this story! Edward is so cute being a feline! It is a bit weird though that he remembers eveything from before he got turned but is unable to go back into who he was before. It's not like he had a master before 12, it's not like him or anyone beside him had continually engaged in sexual activities, so why would he think that he would need to do so? It just makes me a bit confused how someone could know so much about the world but be unable to be part of it ;)
| JemDragons chapter 1 . 3/2
Thank you for not spelling 'tale' with an 'i'. You have no idea how happy this makes me.
| ElizabethBathog chapter 10 . 3/1
Since this have not been updated in some years, i guess this is a dead fic but i enjoyed reading it so thanks for writing it! :)
| taylovesbevin chapter 10 . 11/11/2015
please update soon! This is one of the best FMA books i have ever read! U can't leave us hanging! :'(
| Carol Zoldik chapter 10 . 4/23/2015
Love your fic!
| MyDirtyLittleSecret chapter 10 . 3/30/2015
I just started rereading all my favorited FMA fics after rewatching Brotherhood. I'm not disappointed. This story has such great potential and has been so fun to read this far. Hope you get to the next chapter soon. I understand long dry spells though. I'm in one myself.
| Sifufirelord chapter 10 . 12/9/2014
I really like the direction in which this story is going so far! Edward's backstory is very intriguing and interesting, and you've made it very believable. I like how you portrayed him (even though i'm not usually one to go for such crying/chidish behaviour, in this case it blends well with his character bc of what he's been through.)
I love how you ended this last chapter and am very interested in seeing where you might take it next. Will Roy give in ad sleep with Ed? what happens if he does/doesn't? Will Ed's former master take him away again? whatever happened to Alphonse? Is he alive still, and if not, will edward be able to cope in time? what about winry and pinako? hm hm, these are all the questions and i hope you'll find it in you to answer them, in time. i noticed you havent updated since June, which inst so long actually, but this story is very popular so I'm keeping my hopes up that you'll continue this :D
On another note, one thing that bothered me throughout the whole story (but not enough to stop me from reading the whole thing today, mind you) is that your grammar use is sliglty...poor, idk what other word to use (this is only constructive criticism meant to help you improve in the future, i hope you dont take offense, i'm not trying to attack you), the biggest problem, for me, was that you didnt use commas. at all. sometimes it's very important to use proper ponctuation, especially in bigger sentences, or if one act follows another, because otherwise it can get confusing.
(e.g. sentence 'He looked over at Edward, who was playing with his tail' 'Edward looked up, ahsmaed.'
'Roy reached out, assuring the boy that it was okay.' etc, etc.) You get what i mean, right?
anyway, this is a really good idea you've got here, so i hope you wont completely abandon the story. if you decide to continue, i am very much looking forward to the next chapter :D
| GreedxEd chapter 10 . 7/2/2014
This is one of my favorite fics and I love how it's going. The plot is wonderful and great. I look forward to seeing Ed get more sparks back and becoming Ed again (and hopefully he gets a punch in asshole's face or more) Looking forward to more fic and the next update
| Um chapter 10 . 6/25/2014
I really love your story and all, start to finish, but it was just a bit awkward every time I see the name "Basan".
...because that's my first name... (._.)
| greenwings33 chapter 10 . 5/17/2014
Ed is so cute
| InkHeart2273 chapter 10 . 4/26/2014
D: pleeeeease do more chapters!
This story is brilliant and has so much potential still x
| Akurima86790 chapter 10 . 4/10/2014
JUST. DON'T. STOP. AT. THE. MOST. INTERESTING. PART!11