Reviews for School Rivals
LoveLifeHopeHappiness chapter 10 . 12/7/2008
loved totally.


intensewhatever chapter 10 . 11/28/2008
That was a good story! I wish it was longer though!
Charlie Belle chapter 9 . 9/10/2008
update soon'

love story
Charlie Belle chapter 7 . 8/28/2008
love your story

update soon
nesquick-s chapter 7 . 8/28/2008
MM612 chapter 6 . 8/27/2008
like your story! update soon!
nesquick-s chapter 6 . 8/27/2008
OMG loved it plz hurry
nesquick-s chapter 4 . 8/25/2008
loved 'IT' PLZ HURRY

and dont make the wildcats lose ever
nesquick-s chapter 3 . 8/24/2008
plz dont make her break up with troy make them talk and jordan confess but none gabriella or jordan known that troy was listening
agent.bear chapter 3 . 8/24/2008
I would have liked the chapter a bit longer, because when a chapter is longer, it contains more details about the story.

It would have been good if you could make it longer.

Thank you,
agent.bear chapter 2 . 8/22/2008
It was a good chapter, except it gets a bit confusing when you don't break up the speaking. Sometimes Gabriella or Troy says something twice and it gets confusing because it's not identified.

Try to separate the speaking using different lines, for example:



"Gabriella." "Gabriella"

or you could have them also on separate lines, and say something on the end of it, for example:

"Gabriella," Troy calls.

On the other hand, it was a good chapter, although I would have liked it to involve more of Jordan's trouble to make it more interesting.

Update soon,
nesquick-s chapter 2 . 8/22/2008
omg loved it plz hurry
nesquick-s chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
loved it but i think u should but spaces u know like



do u get it?
agent.bear chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
It was a good story but I would have liked the writing to have been broken up into paragraphs.

The story-line in this story is interesting, please continue the story.

Thank you,