Reviews for A Turn of Events
Fairedenale chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
Update! It's been two years. UPDATE!
Blahhahaha chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
please update
fall-princess chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
hm short but sweet i like it :)
christie chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
Please write more i really want here your version of it
TimesUnfetteredImaginationBomb chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
oh... loved it and cant wait for more to come~
CrimsonNinja-Auditore chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
i don't mean to sound rude or anything but it's not 'can i come in' it's 'may i come in' it's just one of my pet peeves..and the story's really good..keep writting..
XxxThe Devil's Little AngelxxX chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
Okay...love the storyline, but I must beg you on my knees...PLIX! SEPERATE YOUR DIALOGUE! It makes it so much easier to read and understand when you have:

"Are you leaving?"

"Yes."

than evrythng squeasy together!

cant wait 4 the nxt chaptr
PurpleOrchid85 chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
Interesting first chappie, please update, I'm curious to see what happens next...
JK5959 chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
I love Jasper/Bella stories. Please continue.
zanina chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
REALLY GOOD BEGINNING PLZ PLZ PLZ WRITE MORE!
Jazz is mine chapter 1 . 11/22/2008
What are you going to be writing more?PLEAZZ if so THANK YOU
Super Socks chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
kool, keep writiing
AllyCat214 chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
nice begining cant wait for more!
LORiDERR chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
WOW. CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!

-LORI-
yoyoente chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
Okay...interesting concept, but I must beg you on my knees...PLEASE! SEPERATE YOUR DIALOGUE! Even if it's only a one sentence back and forth, put them on seperate lines. It makes it so much easier to read and understand when you have:

"Are you leaving?"

"Yes."

Then them being all squished together...