Reviews for Mommy Dearest
Aryn.Saylor12 chapter 9 . 11/4/2011
I must admit, my heart is broken. What happened to Justin to make him so angry? So vengeful? Why couldnt Nessie go to Jasper? Lol.
Aryn.Saylor12 chapter 6 . 11/4/2011
Wow how horrible of a demise for Carlisle, at the hands of a selfdestructing Esme; at least this tragic event seems to be bringing Alice & Eddie back together. What a twist with Justin, eh? How crazy, to think your mother was dead and to know the whole time you were being abused, well a small portion of the time, it could have been prevented. Crazy..
Aryn.Saylor12 chapter 4 . 11/4/2011
The past few chapters have been very overwhelming for me in a very emotional way. Physical, verbal & emotional abuse can cut so deep, it doesn't matter what age and it is so hard to trust people with what you are going through. This story is very, very dark. Very deep. I can't believe that even though it's Alice's mother she would stand for those actions to go unpunishable by law. I have, literally, found myself shedding a few tears over all the anguish & experiences Edward has gone through in chapter 4, alone. Well done, so far - great job.
Aryn.Saylor12 chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
You did an exceptional job so far. The subject matter is very dark but its such a good one and it seems like the story is showing great potential
MissNikita chapter 9 . 2/25/2011
Bloody hell this was painful to read, I really would love to read the sequal tho.
cmcwilliams chapter 9 . 11/28/2009
amazing work!
micaela chapter 9 . 10/17/2009
it was good in the earlier chapters.

the last one was really stupid though.
Victoria VV chapter 9 . 10/11/2009
This story was awesome! I am totally glad Im not the only one who thinks Edward in pain is hot...*giggles* Great story!
InLoveWithEC chapter 9 . 8/2/2009
So I know this has been finished for a while now, but I'm so lost on what the heck happened. The ending made absolutely no sense, even if you were to continue it.
Let-me-go-now chapter 9 . 2/6/2009
the only thing i didnt like was that alice never admitted to everyone that edward was telling the truth. besides that it was very well written, and believable. poor esme...
Courtney Beth chapter 9 . 2/4/2009
wow, i was holding back sobs when he died. ):

great story and well writin.
Alice Penweather chapter 9 . 2/3/2009
Kason08 chapter 9 . 1/21/2009
Uh yeah, I kinda wanna jump off a cliff now or maybe slash my wrists. That was quite depressing. However, I really enjoyed it. I kinda hoped that the ending could have been a bit brighter but it still works. Good job I especially liked the philosophical musings at the beginning of the chapters.
crazyfunkyjunkyglove chapter 9 . 1/16/2009

rewrite this please

i wanted to cry it sucked so bad



you know i am currently jesting with you...

Well then,

i can see your eyes exploding with hate as i try to write this with text speech

nice talking to you...

sort of...

and just to annoy the crap out of you


Emmett's Girl 47 chapter 3 . 12/5/2008
oh no poor Edward !

i love this story so much :)
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