Reviews for The Papercut
kariza2013 chapter 2 . 4/13/2013
cute
Guest chapter 2 . 3/31/2013
that was so fucking HOT 3
Guest chapter 2 . 7/15/2012
omg dat was so hhhhoooooottttt !
i mean i m speechless !
reading this has turned into the biggest ever yaoi fangirl!
3333
Mal-Aki Ea Hecate chapter 2 . 7/15/2012
Ummmmm...Are you going to write more of this wonderful story?
Gh0st R1d3r chapter 2 . 6/4/2012
you really should continue this. that would be awespme.
andrewtheawesome312 chapter 2 . 1/15/2012
ME GUSTA! Me Likey a lot! That. Is. HELLA SEXY! This was amazing! This is great for a first time, I have to say. It's the best out of a lot and I've read ALOT...
Favorite of Chaos chapter 2 . 10/21/2009
more please i likey i likey
xxSnowxxAngelxx chapter 2 . 8/13/2009
damn that was hot! ..maybe using a bit more variety with the terminology?(just a suggestion)

-still, very very awesomely hot
Paradoxismminant chapter 2 . 7/28/2009
I liked! I liked! Though it did get a little confusing on trying to see the positions...

And watch the homonyms.
Paradoxismminant chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Heh...I like the story and the nicknames...and the open relationship.

You poor thing. KIDNEY FAILURE?
the-universe-is-insane chapter 2 . 6/14/2009
That was hot and also a little strange but also kinda funny!
seto'swifey chapter 2 . 5/9/2009
That...was HOT! Byakuya is a freak! And so is Hanataro! This was really awesome.
KamikazeDestiny08 chapter 2 . 4/22/2009
O.O

Uhm...

Uhh...

**obivously, has no coherent thoughts ATM**
NarutoVixin chapter 2 . 4/2/2009
*gives puppy dog eyes* more please i love this threesome and would love to read more of it (mostly the ways all 3 get together and also the pairs only parts are good i can see so much more but wouldnt be able to help get it out saddly im not good with that kind of thing)
Lemony Goddess chapter 2 . 11/3/2008
Whew! That was phenomenal. Good job! My lemons are so lacking compared to yours. I've read the whole: two cocks in one hole thing before but the way you described it made perfect sense and I could clearly picture it in my mind. Ichi was so adorable and inexperienced! But Hana is such a cute and naughty uke! Byakuya-sama...what can I say? Sex god walking...LOL.

Write more like this in the future please! Us Lemon goddesses need to stick together!
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