Reviews for Up to Speed
spritegirl24 chapter 3 . 8/21/2008
Another great chapter! As for the party...I like the idea of Daniel hitting on Bella and Edward being jealous and stepping in to protect her from him. If there's dancing at the party I think that it would be cool if Bella and Edward shared a very tension filled, electrically charged dance. I just hope that Edward does what Bella says and doesn't drink. It would be funny if somehow she got a bit tipsy though. The drive home would be entertaining. I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
melferd chapter 3 . 8/21/2008
It's really nice to see an assertive Bella, Edward's been taking this way too well, though. I think he might pull the reins out of her hands at the party.
kuntrygal chapter 3 . 8/21/2008
I think it would be good if Daniel put the moves on Bella & Edward got jealous! They should be flirty with each other too!
waterrockz chapter 3 . 8/21/2008
i totally think that daniel should make a move on bella and edward gets really jealous. i love the story so far and can't wait for more chapters.
asf134 chapter 3 . 8/21/2008
Edward's-a-beefcake chapter 2 . 8/20/2008
Way to take charge Bella! I love the fact she is the one calling the shots! Cant wait to read more!
Night script chapter 2 . 8/20/2008
I like Bella... so confident... and Edward likes her... lol...
xcullenette chapter 2 . 8/20/2008
I love this fic so far. I loved how Bella showed Edward up. Bella's gown should be blue.

Cant wait for the next update!
kuntrygal chapter 2 . 8/20/2008
I like it so far! I like bold Bella!
katmeows4no1 chapter 2 . 8/20/2008
meanie, it's not nice to hold a chapter hostage! so what number review am i? what? dont look at me weird! i'm just curious.

i really like the bold and confident bella! Totally awesome that Bella was driving Edward's car! Her gown should be that dark blue that Edward likes. oh, a dark blue fabric that sparkles gently. the design should be strapless, the top part like a corset sort of, then flaring gently all the way down to her heels, but with a long slit starting midthigh.
spritegirl24 chapter 2 . 8/20/2008
lmao! That was priceless. Bella driving his car and beating his time...then doing that proposal and saying that she thought he was cute...and finally when she said that she would be his date. I'm still laughing. I like this Bella. Can't wait for the next update!
xxxxParvati-Patilxxxx chapter 2 . 8/20/2008
Well for the dress you could always go with blue. It's the colour Bella is said to look best in. I loved this chapter, i love that Bella takes control the way that she does! Please update as soon as you can!
xcullenette chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
This fic is very original, I can't wait to see where you take it.
spritegirl24 chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
I love this idea. Edward being a race car driver is sexy. lol. I can't wait to see how Bella tries to convince him to let her build him a car. Hope you continue and update soon!
Poisenedapple chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
sounds like its going to be wait to read more!
3,213 | « Prev Page 1 .. 204 211 212 213 214 215 Next »