Reviews for Up to Speed
edwardandbellabelong2gether chapter 6 . 8/24/2008
LOVE this story!
lookafteryou023 chapter 6 . 8/24/2008
omggz,i dont wanna spoil anything but...

is edward's heart the only once compatible with bella's?.(:

haha im a little curious kittyy.

PLEASE REVIEEWW! (L)
Night script chapter 6 . 8/24/2008
She should ride 'the screamer' first... lol...
kuntrygal chapter 6 . 8/24/2008
Great chapter! I think they should ride The Screamer first & I would love to see Edward in a Goofy hat!
xxxxParvati-Patilxxxx chapter 6 . 8/24/2008
Well at least now maybe Edward won't worry about Bella as much since she will be living across the hall. I loved this chapter, please update again soon!
Elizabeth93 chapter 6 . 8/23/2008
haha, 'scream'... ooh, she should totally get a mickey mouse ears hat, the ones that can have your name on them. it'd be a cute present. :)
xxxxParvati-Patilxxxx chapter 5 . 8/23/2008
Poor Bella! Poor Edward! I feel so sorry for the both of them! Please update again soon!
Elizabeth93 chapter 5 . 8/23/2008
wow, i'm so sad. i think maybe...paintball. sound like something fun they could do. or maybe go to a carnival. since she grew up fast because of her intelligence it'd probably be something she'd miss out on. and it'd help shoe the change in Edward of PLAYBOY to GENTLEMAN. i hope you update soon. :)
katmeows4no1 chapter 5 . 8/23/2008
white water rafting? i've never gone, but i want to.
kuntrygal chapter 5 . 8/23/2008
Awe...good chapter!
reginah72 chapter 5 . 8/23/2008
that was a very touching chapter even though he started off not really like her he does now you can feel it through your writing. As for their first activity maybe start off with something like an amusement park with rollercoasters.
sweetswirlypop chapter 5 . 8/23/2008
I want go sky diving too! LOL. Anyway, for their first fun activity... I'd say scuba diving... or surfing! What? It's fun, you know! P
sweetswirlypop chapter 4 . 8/23/2008
Oh, wicked twist! I like it. Unexpected, but nice!
australianvamp chapter 5 . 8/22/2008
snorkelling... then edward can see bella is a hot bikini

please tell me see gets a heart... why are you doing this to me... do you find sick pleasure in watching me scream in fury
mischief-maker1 chapter 5 . 8/22/2008
Great story! And an original idea too! (I like those)

For their first fun thing...hmm...amusment park? No, go kart track...hehehe...that would be cute. How about a race between the two of them with full sized cars? Of course, they are in California, right? He could teach her to surf or something.

Can't wait for an update!
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