Reviews for To Try
sushixxx17 chapter 23 . 11/18/2013
AHHHHHH THAT WAS AMAZING! I love it! All's well that ends well eh? I guess u could say I believe in it more now :)
CheshireCat19 chapter 23 . 5/15/2012
OMG you had me crying at the end! Kirihara giving a speech like that made me feel like I wanted to be there to see his expresion...GREAT job!
Purplity Purple chapter 23 . 5/8/2012
(FFN is screwing with me. I can't log in. DDD:)

I am a sucker for a)future-fics, b)(awesome)Rikkaidai, and c) happy endings.

I really liked it.

I'm not usually a fan of more than two POVs in a chapter, but you made it work. Kudos for the clever transition and not the *insert name here* POV. I hate those. xD

I'm not really a fan of typos, but there's nothing major to correct. ;)

All in all, a job very well done.

~ Zany

P.S. I loved your Kirihara. :)))

P.P.S. I also loved the other sides of the characters.

P.P.P.S. But most of all, I loved the happy ending. ;DDD
neutralgreen chapter 23 . 9/10/2011
Holy Crap, OMFCG, Hot Damn-


That was amazing and how you kept everyone in character as well as the plot, I actually thought for a moment that RikkaiDai would fall apart, and then you pull off the fake deal, the flashbacks, the park and everything.

I seriously love you for this story and all your one shots. You are an amazing writer. Sadly words cannot express my glee-giddiness-insanity-amazement at how you pulled this off, but I tried.

TTTT I did! But really. Great job!

I should read more drama...LOL :D
Alpha14 chapter 23 . 5/30/2011
Wow. An on-the-spot speech. Made by Akaya... O.O I could never do that...

Aww, the story's finished. T-T Definitely going to my favorites, alright.
Alpha14 chapter 21 . 5/30/2011
At last~! Yukimura~~~ (I'm biased) ...I can't believe that I've read this so fast... One time, I'm in the 12th chapter, the next, I'm in the 21st.

...And I still can't believe that those people believed the toilet paper thing (or did they?). I expected all the hidden cameras and assassins, seeing that everything they were doing are illegal.
Alpha14 chapter 12 . 5/30/2011
THAT'S IT! I HAVE TO REVIEW! ... I've already been crying several chapters ago... Uwaaa~! You're so evil to Yukimura (and everybody else)! ... Strong emotional trigger? Maybe something about tennis, or possibly about Rikkai or Sanada...
Fadey chapter 23 . 5/28/2011
Beautiful. I love it. This is one that will remain in my memories for a long time.

Coco96 chapter 23 . 8/16/2010
Omg! That was totally epic!
Mokutonton chapter 23 . 8/6/2010
I'm not reviewing until the end because its 1:42 am and I have stitches in my foot keeping me up. But, if I really love a story, I can't not review, it just doesn't work for me.

But seriously, I love this story. I'm loopy right now, and I'm not sure if this is an intelligent review, but who frickin cares?

Not me.

But, yeah, I LOVED reading this story!

pentalion chapter 23 . 7/28/2010
pentalion chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Reply to your message:

Yep, finished yesterday. The ending was sufficiently dramatic and happy enough for me, and overall I think the story was great. I'm sure people are still reading it. Everyone loves Akaya!(And all the angst that comes with Rikkaidai.)

You ARE spamming my inbox, but I don't mind. It's nice to see that you reply to and consider comments. I'll add you to my Favorite Authors.

I thought you would appreciate a reply more if it was in a review form.
pentalion chapter 8 . 7/26/2010
Favoriting. I must finish this story.
Shadowblayze chapter 23 . 6/16/2010

Your story was amazing!

One thing that I notice frequently, and am guilty of myself, is character inconsistency from one chapter to another. Slight changes in tone or speech, but obvious to a dedicated reader.

Your story, however, was most likely the most fluid story I have come across! Not only did you make me fall in love with Rikkai all over again, you wove the tale masterfully!

Anyhoo, kudos!
doy.doy chapter 23 . 3/13/2010
AMAZING! DEFINITELY the best fanfiction that I've read in a long time. Honestly, there are so many things I want to comment on/praise, but I doubt it would all fit in the review. Oh well. I'll try to sum it up.

Well, after reading this, I have an even newer love for Rikkaidai xD. I've always loved the team a lot, but now, I have a newer liking for them (hey, what can I say, fanfiction can change your perspective on things). ESPECIALLY Kirihara. xD I think he just moved into my top 5 favourite Prince of Tennis characters (it's a shame how he wasn't already up there).

Everything was just so... ah... I can't describe it. But after going through all their problems... what an awesome epilogue! It's especially great, coming from Kirihara. Personally, I think that his speech he did on the spot would have been much better than the speech he already had ready before leaving it at home. The other regulars should definitely be proud of him. Yeah that's right, Sanada. xD

Wow, I can't believe that I didn't read this fic sooner (you were like, the first author that I put on my "Favourite Authors" list the moment I got a fanfiction account). Shame on me.

Anyways, AWESOME FIC! It's going in my favourites without question. Amazing job, Feyren. :D
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