|Reviews for Complete|
| Rose-Aki chapter 1 . 8/31/2014
I really liked the part where they let their hair down in front of each other, it was so sweet :)
| Terrifiction chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
I was fan girling the whole time.
| GejimayuGirl chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
Very romantic! :)
| SacreJambons chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
aw im almost crying that was so sweet. i loved it, instant fav
| Laladadedo chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
Aww! That was too cute! I loved Shikamaru and Temari in this one. :) I loved the idea of Shikamaru helping her release her hair. It was too cute for words. :) Good job.
| cutebandgeek chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
i loved this story! Loverly, you can write awesome stories!
| Sand-Jounin-Temari chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
aw thats so cute! keep up the good work! *click*
| TaintedMoonlight chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
Hehe. So cute. It's really soft and pretty. I like it.
| Shadow Owner chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
roxas-kh, I loved the vulnerable side of Temari you portrayed in this story (I'm sure she does have it in her to be this way, and I didn't find her too OOC or the story too fluffy. The tenderness, uncertainty and impulse of a budding new relationship have been well portrayed here.
I thought you did a great job justifying both Shikamaru and Temari's actions, making the progression in their relationship very realistic. Nice work; thank you for writing this story!
| lovesrainscent chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
Hey - good story - I didn't think it was too fluffy at all - very sweet and sincere but not overly fluffy. And I didn't find Temari OOC, either - just 'quiet' as you described her - it was a very contemplative moment for them both and you portrayed that well.
| lexisss chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
were so sweetI loved it so much!
| handna95 chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
that was very good i liked it a lot
| xlilyunyun chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
When you sleep with ur hair up, it really does hurt.
| Kittymama12 chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
This is freakin amazing. I love it and I love you for writing it.