Reviews for Poison of the Heart
iStyx chapter 1 . 3/28
Well, this one is much, much better than "The Deadliest Poison".
Ibskib chapter 1 . 11/28/2016
The least few were a tad too melodramatic, emo!Naruto isn't that interesting to read about, I would have expected a bittersweet ending rather than something that was an outright downer.
I think it would have been a better ending with the last three lines deleted, and perhaps a few more lines about Naruto and Hinata healing each-other and finding happiness together after honoring Neji's memory by naming his firstborn and heir to the clan after him.

Though it would have been interesting to see something like the plot-frame ArmorOfGeddon suggested in his review of the previous story-version
Jonin Neji Hyuga chapter 1 . 5/9/2016
Though you may not think it is a good story, I think it was acutally quite good.

Poor Naruto...that'd be very hard.

And if the Nine Tails chakra could actually do that...that'd be terrifying!
Annoy mouse chapter 1 . 1/8/2015
I like this idea very much! Completely plausible too.
Ben chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
Loved the idea and liked that you kept it to a oneshot many authors try to draw out one good idea into a multichapter book that just falls appart but this was nice and to the point
d0.0b chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
I think i prefer this version to the other, where Naruto is ignorant of his own power. I don't like the stories where he is genuinely as stupid as he is shown in cannon, so having him not notice that every single thing he hits with his youki jyuuken dies, or randomly pump gaara's head full of youki and then watching it rot and NOT realizing that something is wrong, just rubs me the wrong way. This, the self sacrificing Naruto who makes a promise (dedicating his life to make up for killing Neji) and then does everything in his power to fulfill that promise fits much better.
Yoholic chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
An excellent oneshot though i believe the guilt he has is a bit over the top
Thanatos147 chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
EPIC there are no better words to describe it
hhrforeverhhr chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
wow, i loved the one shot, it was so much better than the ones that i have recently read. write some more!
Eclipse1234 chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
Tenketsu unsealing goes *pop*?
Lord Sia chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
Much better than the other version. Perhaps a mystic parallel can be drawn (law of correspondence, anyone?) between the power of the poisonous chakra and the poison in Naruto's heart?
Darak chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
I believe that since Neji could expell chakra from his tenketsu he stood a fair chance of expelling the poisonus chakra from the Kyuubi.

On top of that he was prepared to kill Naruto thus his death should not be so much of a shock.

And finally I'd say that if he didn't know when to retreat he didn't deserve to survive.

A lot of angst on all sides for something that is standard in the Shinobi world.
Yukihana Hisako chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
-shudder- angsty, awesome, well written, good plotline. I like the tone of this, very realistic. For some reason I like stories that have Naruto not becoming Hokage because of guilt. Dunno why...
Lord of Murder chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
more complete and realistic but at the same time more depressing.
narutoadventurist chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
This is an nice story
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