Reviews for False Beginnings
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 53 . 9/17/2008
didn’t know I would feel this way.”

“What way?”

“So overwhelmingly proud.”

That is so beautiful. If only Luke could get even one moment like that on GH.

You really did Dilu proud with this story. Brava!
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 52 . 9/15/2008
“How does my cousin put up with you?”

“How does my cousin put up with you?” she shot back.

“I have no idea,” Jason and I say in unison, earning annoyed looks from our respective mates.

Love that Jarly got a mention in this chapter.
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 51 . 9/15/2008
Loved all the dialogue when she gave birth.

Adore Lucky going in first.

And I totally got teary over Tracy's scene.

Awesome chapter! Love it.
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 50 . 9/14/2008
Those kisses were very hot!

and yay! the baby is coming. So excited.
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 49 . 9/13/2008
That was a beautiful love scene for them! You write Dilu wonderfully.
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 48 . 9/13/2008
“Are you ready for this, Sis?”

“Will you always be there for me, no matter what?” He nodded. “Then, I’m ready. I can do this. I love Dillon, and as long as I have you just in case, I know that I will always be fine.”

OMG, that is so beautiful. That is everything Lucky and Lulu should be on GH.
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 47 . 9/11/2008
Oh my goodness, they are getting married right now! E! How exciting. I love it.
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 46 . 9/10/2008
. “It’s been awhile since you kissed me like that.”

“I was afraid that your heart would stop,” I chide.

“It probably would have. I so wanted to pull you on top of me. We could be really quiet, they’d never know.”

“Hmm, I was thinking exactly the same thing. I could have rocked your world right here in General Hospital.”

“Stop, you’re getting me too excited,” he manages, holding up his hands in front of his chest. I

I really like how cute and yet sexy they are together!
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 45 . 9/10/2008
He wrote a screenplay about her. That's uber romantic. I remember her reading it in the previous chapter. Aw.

“I always miss you when you’re gone.”

and that is why When You are Gone is my ultimate Dilu song, from Avril Lavigne.

Man, I wish Dillon would could back and save Lulu right now on GH.
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 44 . 9/10/2008
That surprise engagement party was adorable.
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 43 . 9/10/2008
I love that she slept in the bed with him all night. That is so romantic and sweet.
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 42 . 9/10/2008
You’re amazing, you know that?”

“I learned it all from you

I love that.

I've never written a story that is so long in first person. Did you find it easier or harder?
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 41 . 9/8/2008
He’s crying now, sending both Lucky and me into shock. I struggle to sit up. My body feels heavier than normal, but I manage to elevate myself into a semi-comfortable reclining position. Reaching my hand out, I grab a hold of my father’s jacket and pull him down to me. Wrapping my arms around him, I embrace him close to me. Over Dad’s shoulder, I catch Lucky’s eye. He’s crying too, now.

How beautiful!

And LOl at this

“I see Caroline has you by the, well, you know, as always,” my father jokes.

That's a great line.
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 40 . 9/7/2008
Love this line

“You know how I am, go big or go home,” I joke.

Thank Goodness the baby wasn't lost!
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 39 . 9/7/2008
Oh no! Poor Lulu. I do love Lucky telling her to Close her eyes and think good thoughts, though. He rocks as a brother.
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