|Reviews for Hell Hath No Fury Like Abby Sciuto|
| Tabbylo chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
NO NO NO!
You can't just end it - it's too amazing for that! :O
| Violet Temperance chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
Love the story, is there anymore to come? I'd like to read more :)
| saya4haji chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
I just stumbled upon your profile and have to say that you are very talented. I am a huge zabby fan and your profile was a treasure chest for me. Of all the stories however this was my favourite.
It was such a different idea compared to everything else I have read. Very unique. I love the way you did ziva's thoughts about being with a woman, about how her father would disappove. Ziva's indecision of whether or not to pursue Abby. The needs of the mission against her own personal needs. A very intersing idea. The conversation in bed afterwards and zivas thoughts as she left were extremly well done.
I like the internal struggle of ziva. For a person from a conserative jewish background this would be a very real moral problem.
The need to protect abby and also to protect her brother are good conflicts. I love the way you wrote the conflict. Abby is pained that ziva lied to her while Ziva is confused and hurt. I would love to see a sequel to this one shot or see it as a series.
I love your writing and see that you mainly stick to one shots. I would love to see you write a series, the increased length allowing you to fully develop a characer, their growth, internal stuggles, emotions and chacter development and story arc.
Thank you very much for your writing.
| freaksrule chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
This is awsome very well written and I love the story line.
| Dolphin64575 chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
amazing, love the backstory and present tense, you should write more!
| Emziiee-xxx chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
ths is good
you should carry on and do a make up and make out scene
just do one with a bit of dfferancce 2 da normal ones eh
plz write back just to let me know that you have gt this message
| Silvara rivana chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
wow... I like the concept. Wish there was like a sequal or something for latter when they are friends towards each other maybe abby forgiving her after a while. shruges. I love your storys.
| BeeTheRainbowWriter chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
I loved it and I hope you keep going! I'm very interested in seeing what more could happen. I don't know if you want to leave it at just one chapter or not but I'd be very excited to see more. Thanks for putting this up, I really liked it.
| The Queen of Confusion chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
| crearealidad chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
This is a fascinating idea for their history and very well written. I definitely enjoyed it.
| me chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
write solme more and make them get together
| aVerySpecialAgent chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
WOW. I loved that. I've developed a real liking for the Abby/Ziva thing and you had a great idea for their history. Great piece of writing )
| gonnabemarine chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
This is so great... I really wish you'd continue with it.