|Reviews for Broken Yolk|
| lord periperi chapter 5 . 11/2/2013
Oh, I LOVE it!
| Natalie chapter 5 . 8/7/2013
This is really good!
| Sevsevseverus chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
At first I wasn't really sure I'd like this because I'm not into the whole G/D thing, but this turned out to be pretty good! Just one thing: when you said "Charlie had Fleur" maybe you meant "Bill had Fleur"?
| EggDupont chapter 5 . 5/2/2013
I really, really liked this. great work! going to favorites 3
| Light on the Horizon chapter 5 . 4/12/2013
Great story, I really loved reading it! :-)
| dramione143 chapter 5 . 3/23/2013
I love you.
| myyinfatuation chapter 5 . 3/16/2013
i was dying for the first 4 chapters but part 5 made it worth it (wow im actually grinning)
best line: But we're not. We're not. Do you get that?
gosh darn it, the detail that went into you paragraphs were sometimes a bit too much for my sleep deprived mind to pay attention too. but i did get that one (theres probably a dozen more instances of this sort of thing in your story but i liked this one)
sighhhh as i was reading this, it somehow reminded me of the movie when sally met harry (hate/loveee that movie) which is a very good thing. also reminded me of that quote you used in a summary of another fanfic you wrote, something like you dont remember what people said or did but you do remember how they made you feel gahhhh anyways great great story
| missaishah23 chapter 5 . 2/25/2013
Well, this wasn't what I expected but honestly it is sooooo much better than what I thought it would be. At first I was like..."Okay another marriage story Ginny and Draco don't get married, and then Draco and Hermione get together...yada yada"
But it was so much more. I feel like I learned something here. And is it me or is Elena like really wise? Like I have her bits highlighted on my phone. Seriously I wish I had an Elena. She is so very right and she is normal too, she isn't wise in a holier-than-thou way either. I really love this story. I am definately adding it to my favorites; it may be short but it has impact in those few chapters 3
| guest chapter 5 . 1/27/2013
Great story. I beleive that Ginny and Draco planned it all. Very good writing.
| schmallows chapter 5 . 1/27/2013
Beautiful story. Gave me shivers and now, I'm thinking about how their future appeared to be. I like how you portrayed Draco - it was realistic, like he was relaying his past lessons to Hermione in such a way that she would gain from it too.
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/11/2013
I love the story but I kind of don't get it I think it's because I'm young and I still need to discover what love is but I will continue to figure out this story the longer it takes me the better it gets
| ahschung chapter 5 . 10/11/2012
| Orchid Rollo chapter 5 . 9/27/2012
I felt that I have angina when I read that Draco will married Ginny and secretly hope that anyone would just ruined it. And thank God it's Harry. Even thought he's hurt Hermione and all that jazz, he still got a knack to save the day. Teehee...
Nice ending btw. :)
| Avrille Nordlicht chapter 5 . 9/17/2012
Adoooraaable! Just witty and completely different!
| Spunkalovely chapter 5 . 9/5/2012
This is absolutely perfect and wonderfully written!