Reviews for Broken Yolk |
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![]() ![]() ![]() cant explain why i like this. it just feels like a story that's realistic yknow. love the way you went with hermiones pov and just i really liked it. thank you! |
![]() ![]() I love this stories! Have gonna in a binge reading all your Harry Potter fanfics️ I loved the different definitions on love, marriage and life in itself! |
![]() ![]() ![]() thanks for sharing your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So when Harry gets tired of Ginny, will he come creeping back to Hermione with his tail between his legs? : D That would be kind of fun to see! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Attica, what an incredible story. Beyond the ship, I think this fic has stayed with me because of the way you relate Hermione's feelings. Plus I love the fact that despite Hermione having a crush on Harry at all times, most of his interactions are with Draco. it's interesting to see the perspective of the people who were left "behind" in Harry and Ginny's love story. I honestly think I'll be looking forward to seeing how Hermione's life unfolds (I really don't think she ends up working out in her relationship with Draco, life doesn't usually work out that way). Anyway, thank you so much for this, it's been a long time since I read such an anguishing but incredibly written fic 3 PD. I'm sorry for my English. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is really sad that we don't get any dramione relationship stuff. They just kissed and fucked. Thats it. Is that why I perused this story for 5 pages and 3 years. Damn |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really loved your flawed depiction of Hermione - how she enjoys being a "good person" and how that comes back to bite her since she makes a victim out of herself. It felt very real, very honest. Thanks for writing this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely hate Ginny/Draco/Hermione love triangles (because I never really liked Ginny in particular) but yours was BRILLIANT! You are genius! Great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful story. Really sad one, hopefully the end is happy ! I did not understand how Hermione fell il love with Malefoy though. And the behaviour of Ginny confused me a little, i thought she loved Draco, she was marrying after all. But apart form that, all this story was really moving and so true. You do a great job at analysing and writing the downs of life. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man my heart feels heavy reading this...it’s really, really good. But sigh I need some vanilla happiness now for dramione |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. I didn't expect to like this. it has all the things I despise, Drinny for a start, a weak Hermione. In the end, I might actually like it, love it even, which is funny because that is exactly the story. I don't know if you intended for that to happen, but it did anyway. |
![]() ![]() So fricken amazing! Read it in one sitting, absolutely could not put it down. Thank you so much for writing and sharing it with us :)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Argh! Can I order a Draco Malfoy right now?! Where can I get this man?! I want your DracoMalfoy dear author. I mean who doesn't?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "As if all life is doing is testing how bad you really want it..." Wise words... |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my god I'm not joking! I'm relating soooo much! God! you are a complete stranger to me! I'm definitely from a different country and yet I totally get what you just said! About the unlovable people who are being loved! God dam it! Dude! |