Reviews for A Light in the Dark
Amu4ever chapter 2 . 8/30
I am going to put your story as "favourite". I like the way you write, but I prefer them in multi-chaptered stories with background.

I do appreciate the good work though. So, I will favourite it in case someone asks me for a recommendation of that kind or as referene to how to best write to represent the feel that canon had.

It is a real good story :)
Amu4ever chapter 1 . 8/30
Hmmm...I really do wonder how anyone can prefer Zero over Kaname. Though Yuuki did become incedible OOC in canon after she was turned into a vampire. (After all she behaved the same way as a child before she became human, so why would her character chane so drastically when becoming a vampire once again? Makes no sense.)

Oh and in canon Kaname becomes mad. Although that is partly Yuukis fault. (And her OOC behaviour.)
Guest chapter 3 . 5/7
Wow. This is so HOT!
The Wolf's Knight chapter 2 . 4/5/2015
Man! Zero alway ruins the fun if I were yuuki I would kill him
firepokemonfox chapter 5 . 2/23/2015
Oh chairman you are wise and funny
firepokemonfox chapter 4 . 2/23/2015
Zero you are to
NessaTheSinner chapter 5 . 2/4/2014
O god Aido you creepy creepy pervert ._.
SleepingSouls chapter 6 . 12/16/2013
O/O ummm...I didn't just read this...Psh..I totally didn't read this...
backwards.4u.only chapter 5 . 8/16/2013
I loved it! Great job!
0.0' Kahli hime chapter 6 . 10/31/2012
Oh, how sad... i was having so much fun...
woodlandfairykirk chapter 6 . 10/20/2012
this was perfect(: kaname is so hot!
Bananers chapter 5 . 10/8/2012
The ending was awesome... I laughed really hard
Guest chapter 6 . 9/26/2012
PrincessAmioKi chapter 6 . 8/14/2012
I forgot how much I really liked this one. I have yet to read the follow up because you "abandoned" it. Here is where I will give you some very critical advice, never start something you are not going to finish. As a writer, your readers and fans are depending on you. To let them down is disrespectful to them and yourself. If you do not believe that you can finish a piece do not post it or at least find someone to finish it for you if you have hit the proverbial "brick wall" called writers block. This is in no way a flame, just a critique. I wish you the best of luck. As I said in my other review, I consider you on of the best writers on the site based on your writing of "Merits;" therefore you have my continued support and best wishes in your future writing. Good luck!

D3ATHR0SE chapter 5 . 7/27/2012
This chap. is mi fav :)
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