Reviews for Sacrifices Betrayals Love and Foolishness
jules3677 chapter 4 . 6/26/2013
Very nice. Had a period of adjustment with your writing style then got into the story. I liked how you changed POV's. The tone of Harry as you described him losing the wards of Privet Dr & being forced to marry to be safe was so tranquil as if Harry was watching himself from afar as events occurred. I had fun reading your story. Thankyou.
dragons an' fire chapter 7 . 6/20/2013
Loved all of this. The original Snape/Harry and this Draco/Neville side fic. Your characterization and story development is top notch.
EugeBlack chapter 7 . 4/29/2013
I really liked the story, you did a great job with it.
Mashkai30 chapter 7 . 2/7/2013
Wonderful story! Thanks for sharing!
Titania Faith chapter 4 . 1/29/2013
AWEEEE... I loved this sooooo much! :3
KitsuneDango chapter 7 . 1/12/2013
my heart ached so much for the Neville and Draco chaps
Random Reader chapter 5 . 1/10/2013
Okay, I'm really loving this fic! I love how all the characters feel essentially like themselves, I even like Draco:) Very well written, coherent. I lie the narrative flow and I like the glimpses into the characters heads and your descriptions (especially of Lucius and Draco) are lovely. Automatic favorite so far!
sarahsezlove chapter 7 . 12/25/2012
This whole story - first of Harry and Severus and then of Draco and Neville - filled me with so many emotions.
Thank you.
Guest chapter 7 . 10/29/2012
Aw this is so cute, you described all the internal problems so well. I liked this story a lot.
7mig chapter 7 . 10/8/2012
I very much like your story. I hope you will find time to write more (soon). :-)
DemeRain chapter 7 . 8/3/2012
Very good story. I was a bit surprised to find this is really two stories, culminating in one of the most shocking couples in HP fanfic I've read about. Let's just say, I did not see that one coming. This is exactly the reason I avoid author's notes until after I'm done with the stories, I almost dropped my Kindle when I realized where this was going. Thanks for sharing.
SinfulMind chapter 7 . 6/30/2012
Thank you. That was an incredible read - beautiful narration.
tgcgoddess chapter 5 . 6/4/2012
Oh, I liked this one! It seemed like every character in this fic was broken in one way or another, and yet so many of them were whole in the end.

But I must say, Draco kind of stole the show for me. I disliked him so much. And then I read part 4 and it all made sense. I teared up a little for him.
delia cerrano chapter 7 . 5/6/2012
I've only read Chapter 6 & 7 but they were so good. You really make me feel so bad for Draco. I hope you continue and have Neville & Draco end up together - love them! Now I will go back & read the 1st 5 chapters. Hope Harry & Snape work out. I think they might be good together - sort of opposites attract. I've always kind of liked older with younger in couples. Don't know why.
Ari chapter 7 . 4/22/2012
I love this story so much! Im so happy you wrote another chapter, it seemed like it just dropped off at the end. It would be great if you would do another story about Harry and Snapes life together. Ive got an ideal in my head about Snape overhearing Ron say its strang they have a child and a life together but never went on a date or ever said things about their feelings with each other. and Snape gets all paranoid that Harry will leave him bc they dont have a normal retationship and Harrys never been in another relationship.
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