|Reviews for Sacrifices Betrayals Love and Foolishness|
| Glougloutine chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
I know you finished the story already but I had to review every chapter. THIS ONE? PERFECT !
You had me crying at least twice, and god this moment :
'"If… if you want me to, I… I will leave," he gulps and is afraid to meet the man's eyes and see relief in them. "I mean, he's dead, right? Sir. I do not need anyone to protect me and you… well, you do not need me here too. I mean that if you don't want me he-here…" Harry's breathe catches, stumbles over the knot in his throat and there is nothing he can do, to stop the single, sad tear that rolls down his cheek.'
I swear my chest hurt. This is wonderfully written, and I think you portrayed quite greatly Harry; it's beautiful.
I'm not ususally a Snarry fan but I'm glad I cliked on your link !
| The Seaberry chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
I love this! You have such a beautiful writing style. I do hope you continue, or at least write more Severus in the future!
| Mollan chapter 6 . 7/11/2011
Great story!Keep it up:)
| EvilAngelBB chapter 6 . 7/11/2011
Great story. I can't wait to read the next chapter of the Draco/Neville pairing. It is one I am very unfamiliar with, but will probably do a search for now. Hopefully there is a little more closure with the Harry/Snape section. It just seems like there can be more written about them. Hope to get an update soon and please keep writing!
| Zagadska chapter 3 . 7/10/2011
You know, I was quite hesitant to read this story just because of the fact that it's Snarry, which I never really saw in this kind of perspective, but it actually worked. The only part I didn't like was the cheating and second chances, but alas, tis only my personal opinion. Otherwise, thank goodness I took a chance on your story because I see that there can be a romantic story between the two if written right, so thank you!
| ebil angel chapter 6 . 7/6/2011
Both Naville and Draco are oddly fitting XD
| LBQIO chapter 6 . 7/4/2011
| Avid Anon chapter 3 . 7/3/2011
"One day Harry wakes up and decides that it can't continue like this. He rolls out of the bed… well, the fact that he 'rolls' already says something about the situation, doesn't it? He is not even sure how far he is, precisely. It could be seven months, or it could be eight."
That came as a bit of a shock. I knew this was going to be mpreg, but wow...usually I prefer mpreg when Severus is the one who ends up expecting because I feel that often times, Harry ends up soooo whiney, and with Severus, that's to be expected...and, over all, I feel that the fics with Prego Snape-o are much better written. I'll still see how yours goes. Perhaps you can change my mind...
I still prefer Snape being the mother in their relationship, but you wrote it very well at least. :D
| Avid Anon chapter 2 . 7/3/2011
Ooh! This chapter came as a nice surprise! I looove seeing multiple angles on the same events! Yay! Now I get to see what's been going on behind those black tunnels of his...
"Severus hates hypocrites more than he hates villains."
Oh! That line made me laugh soooo hard! Especially right after talking about his "magic hating father!" Oh the irony!
"A prince on the dragon or even a princess on the unicorn."
That made me laugh, and then:
"He would scare the dragon away, not to mention the unicorn."
Sealed it! Oh dear! That was great! I can totally picture Snape scaring off a unicorn!
Great job writing Snape! I like how you captured him; how complex you've made him and all. Great chapter and thus far, I am still reading (because now I sense a bit of hope in the situation). :D
| Avid Anon chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
You have done a very good job of setting the mood and tone of the story thus far. Granted, there are a few spelling/grammar errors that a beta could help clear up, but nothing that anyone who isn't a nut can't get over. You have done a great job at conveying how alone Harry feels-I almost feel as if I AM alone. This might end up being one of those amazing stories that I never finish reading because of the tone-it isn't because it's bad, it's because I'm not a strong enough person to deal with the pain you have so brilliantly created.
One nit-picky thing:
"How dare byou/b! You know nothing! NOTHING!
Since when do you care?"
It is difficult to tell who is talking here.
Overall, great! The moods and tones were all spot on! You have a real knack for making people feel the emotions as if they were their own! Great job! :D
| wandamarie chapter 6 . 7/3/2011
wow it was a good one thanks
| RRW chapter 6 . 7/3/2011
Absolutely incredible. Fantastic and any other synonym for AWESOME! I can't wait for part 2!
| Nenefee chapter 2 . 4/21/2011
I wouldn't worry about a "lack of dialogue" or some such nonsense: some people can write it and some can not, just as some like to read it and some do not.
As it is, having more of the conscience of a character can be much more enlightening than forced, constructed dialogue; in this case, for me, this fic still very much conforms with the notion 'show, don't tell'. And considering the characters in question, one can easily imagine their lack of direct communication. Thus, the style seems very much fitting.
You wrote that you are not a native English speaker, and while this explains mistakes and grammatical errors, it is still no excuse. You (and your readers) can benefit greatly of a Beta reader.
| soratanaka chapter 4 . 12/22/2010
Such a sweet and happy ending. I liked the story. :-)
| Veneya chapter 5 . 10/30/2010
hmm I quite liked it, even the added chapter in the end was quite interesting...:D!