Reviews for Bedtime
Shani8 chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Aww... great piece! Very beautifully written, as well.

Thanks for writing and for making the W/E shipper in me very happy! :)
Oakheart chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Hey this is great! I love the ending when you said, "I drifted off into a peaceful sleep as Will’s heart and mine began to beat as one" -beautiful!
roseperpetual chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
Oh, poor Elizabeth. I love her not staying on the island for ten long years and instead going to Singapore (she is still the Pirate King) and raising Younger Will there. It's sad how Younger Will only has stories to tell him about Will, who has missed so much.
Smithy chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
This is a very loving piece about how a woman stays true to the man she loves. I hope to see more.
just jacs chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
that was lovely. I really enjoyed this
grecianxpiratex07 chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
aww...this was so beautiful and well written! I loved it! totally gonna fav. ;)

Nytd chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
Nicely written!

Lovely sentimental longing for Will to return home without being overly sappy and full of angst. I like the idea that Will will arrive home to a son that has heard about him every night at bedtime.

Well done!


buffycorvin chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
love it