Reviews for Subway Radical
wilkiswilk chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
Oh god, this is sad. Poor Yumi-kun...well at least she left him alive. Sort of.

Wah you also made Shunsui evil in this. Damn, I've always saw him as the nice jokey captain. And now that view is...hmm how should I say this...ruined.

Beautiful written. As sad as it is, I love it.
Hiza Montmorency chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
This was beautifully written.

Brava, brava, bravissima.
lordofthepineapple chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
Personally I liked it. It didn't make much sense but since when does fanfiction have to make sense? I think it would be interesting if there was a sequel or a few more chapters.
Breezybiatch chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
i like it! man, i dont like shunsui here, was an ass. why cant nanao fall for someone like yumi-chan!
chica blanca chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
Aw you didn't kill 'em both...oh well, was good this way too.
judikickshiney chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
That was fun! Yumi was cool. I would have done some other things before injecting him, had I been Nanao...You know what I mean...

Ikkaku owns. He didn't have enough screen time, I must say. Probably had a girl waiting in his room...

Evil Shunsui and Evil Juushiro are amazing. I give you props. It's hard to make them mean...

I liked it. ;D

TheWatcherandReader chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
I'm glad you didn't end with some "redemption" bull at the end there. So I like this. Yeah, I do. Keep on updating.
mysteriousmaidenwarrior chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
What we women will do for a guy. I always thought she had a evil side to her.
Lintu Hitose chapter 1 . 8/21/2008

Amazing story...
DelMarch chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
Dedicated to... me? *cue fangirl squealing* Thankyou thankyou thankyou :) !

Of course, you also need to take into account all the anxious "Nonononono!" once I figured what Nanao had in mind, and the awful sniffling and "How could you!" once she did it.

All in all... I LOVE IT! So simple, so straightforward and yet so completely weird at the same time. Typical PND work :) !

My favourite parts:

- The "death" scene: it was so sweet!

- And the little glimmer of hope at the end: it changes everything.

And Yumi of course. Beautiful, beautiful Yumichika...

Thank you so much :) !