Reviews for The Kyuubi's gift: Redux
Hawk chapter 1 . 10/27/2014
At only 1/3 of the way through the first chapter I have lost my suspension of disbelief due to the ridiculous overpowering of the character and his too intense for such a young child training sessions. I saw 16 chapters and thought it had potential but not if I can't even get halfway through one.
Guest chapter 16 . 8/24/2014
Dang this story was so good but I hope you continue it even if it has been a few years I really enjoyed this it was just awesome
narku the ulnimate fusion chapter 4 . 7/15/2014
Is this story going to end up as a harem or just stay Narusaku since naruto is getting a lot of attention lately
Strawhattedpirate chapter 10 . 6/11/2014
this was good turned bull shit
Nightmare daniell61 chapter 1 . 5/3/2014
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Dark Fash chapter 15 . 8/18/2013
well nice fic... When do we get the rest? I can't wait ...
Veldrisk chapter 16 . 8/1/2013
Excellent story. I would love to see this story continued and see how the girls and Naruto handle their relationships.
flaming rose chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
Hello. The Shit:

1. This is way to fast. It's unbelieveable, and completely wacky.

2. It seems u've got the suffixes to the names wrong. I mean, u could've meant it that way, but I'm pretty sure Sasuke, like, ALWAYS called Itachi nii-SAN -not sama- when he would call him that at all -u know, with the whole I-killed-the-entire-clan thingy.

3. U've got a LOT of grammer mistakes in here. I'd suggest a beta 4 that, and before shipping it off to a beta for fixing go back over it and try to slow it down a bit. This seems more like a plot line than a story.

So that and thank u! Please take and look into my add vice. Anyway, happy summer and peace, y'all!
CalcBoy91 chapter 16 . 12/10/2012
Your grammar leaves much to be desired. The only reason I haven't tossed this story is because you have a very interesting plot design. I would suggest getting a beta reader.
Erydanes chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
(Naruto's P.O.V.; first year of academy and six years after Naruto's birth)
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Hoping on a stool with grace unlike a normal four-year-old, I grin, "Of course! And don't worry! I can pay for the rest!"

"How, may I ask, does a four-year-old pay for a couple of bowls for ramen," I hear a voice behind me, and turn around to see Itachi about to take a seat.

..hmmmmm... six years after his birth his age is 4 years old... "interesting"...
dimensiontimetraveler chapter 16 . 10/16/2012
haha mark of the innocent..orochi died? i swear, they shouldb after madara n not naruto x.x naruto is getting too many girls x.x
69AnimeFreak69 chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
you know some things in the story MAKE NO SENSE!
sb chapter 16 . 8/8/2012
good story, the only thing that sucked was the first person view. it can have you reread certain part to see who said what, but other then that great job.
sd chapter 4 . 6/23/2011
didnt he gain 4 tomoes?
SalemTheSpeakerOfTruth chapter 2 . 3/30/2011
God dammit, I just really hate Sakura. She's worse than Hinata, who is also unbearable.
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