|Reviews for Tibby Story|
| perksobeingawallflower chapter 4 . 11/7/2013
i love your story!
| Clementine Folchart chapter 5 . 9/10/2013
I would love you to continue this! It might be too late, but please do, I only just found this! Thank you! :D
| beccawaye chapter 4 . 7/16/2013
Please continue. This story is so good.
| tiffany.woodruff.161 chapter 4 . 7/16/2013
I am waitting patiently to see what happens next.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
..why post something if your not dedicated to it? For goodness sakes, edit
| Black Opal Coven chapter 3 . 6/15/2013
i know it has been a while but you should update. :) threre are a lot of people that would really like to see this continued.
| Movieluv167 chapter 3 . 11/20/2012
Good story. Hope they find Tibby soon. Wonder what Bee and Carmen are gonna say? Will they be mad Lena didn't say anything sooner? You should continue this.
| tiffany.woodruff.161 chapter 3 . 10/5/2012
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/29/2012
STOP WORRYING IF ANYONE IS READING! THERE'S PLENY OF PEOPLE READING IT! JUST FINISH THE STINKIN STORY ALREADY!
| JarleyJelissaaaa chapter 3 . 5/31/2011
yes please continue, i love this story
| JarleyJelissaaaa chapter 2 . 5/31/2011
i'm reading it you just need to make it a little bit longer and have people speaking and going places and doing things
| Rockets Love chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
LUV IT! UPDATE UPDATE SOON
| HeyIt'sElena chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
hehe this is kinda funny.
| Miss Peg chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
I agree, more description would make this story better than it is. You've written this in a script like way, maybe you should familiarise yourself with a less script-like style of writing! I think it might help you to read some of the other stories and look at how they're written!
Please don't feel offended, or upset, or anything like that about these reviews. It's good to get constructive criticism to help you to improve your writing. I've spent years writing fanfiction and looking back on my old stories is so funny because of how differently I write now. So please carry on writing and I hope to read some more of your stories soon, I think you have potential to do even better! :)
| WriterInTheMaking101 chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
Hey! So I don't want at all to be rude and I hate those reviews when people are really unkind, but this story needs a lot of work. I'll try to give some constructive critisicm buecause I think this story has some potential. Please don't get offended, I'm not saying it to be mean, just trying to help!
1. It needs much more description, not just dialouge. A story filled with people talking and no actions can get boring after a while. So, for example, instead of saying Brian: Bye. He says this all upset and unhappy, you could say, "Bye," Brian said sadly, his finger lingering on the door.
2. It's not really a good idea to say OMG instead of oh my god. It gives off the impression of a very juvenile story.
3. Try to write a little more loosely. Imagine this is an actual converation, between two people, a young girl and boy, who actually may be pregnant.
Hopefully that helps a little bit, good luck!