Reviews for Bay of Fire |
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![]() ![]() ![]() O, that was really good. I loved the two boys interacting, and the crew, that was just a nice idea, having them help out, and just kind of showing that not all spirits all bad, though I don't believe that was your intension. It was a nice story, and sweet to, with Bobby and Ted and Tom. My fav part though had to be the part with the shirt, it was just so Winchester :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This keeps getting better and better! I'm holding my breath for the next chapter! Awesomeness! Five lovely warm and dry Impalas with M&Ms and a new Zeppelin tape. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done! I'm both looking forward to the last chapter and wishing it wouldn't end. Great visuals. I can easily imagine Sam struggling in the ocean trying to keep Dean afloat. I'm trying to tie the end of this chapter to the begining of the first one and have to wonder what happened to the wreckage Dean was on in the opening. I suppose you'll tell us next chapter. Thanks for the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving this story, brilliant work : - ) I've never read a story where the boys are out at sea, it's great to read something different. Poor Dean and Sammy. Bobby needs to get there quick. Really Looking forward final chapter x Loz x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, kiddo! You've outdone yourself! This is awesome, a wonderful continuation of chapter 1. Love all the brotherly love, concern, angst, and limpness and the details of the ship slowly sinking, the rope tangling Sammy to it and Dean's desperate attempt to free his little bro...squee! I love Sam in this piece, too. He is totally dedicated to saving Dean...showing such strength of character, determination, and selflessness which we know our youngest Winchester has through and through. I love the banter between the boys, too. Dean joking when scared or hurt/Sam knowing exactly what his bro is doing with the humor. Loved Dean trying to command Sam to let him go if it comes down to it and Sam refusing. This story is love! Super job...can't wait to see what happens next. Will we see any more Sammy limpness, a reversal in roles of the brothers as they struggle to survive until help comes since both are injured ,or will our youngest Winchester remain the hero that saves the day? Can't wait for the update! Any spoilers? Giggle |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm enjoying your story. You are doing a wonderful job of writing the brothers as they fight to survive. They are both injuried, but insist on helping each other and that is why we love them. The scenes are so descriptive, one can see the story while reading it. Thanks for sharing your story with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Awesome new chapter! I hope Harrigan is enjoying it as much as me because it's amazing! Badly Hurt!Dean is always good for me but there also some good hurt Sam and they're both so protective of each other! Let's hope Bobby find them soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Another great chapter! So much excitement! I can't wait for another chapter! You said it should be up in another day or so? That is not too long to wait I guess. Seems like a long time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How much do I *love* bossy Sam "trespassing on big brother's turf"? It goes without saying that the brothers being concerned about each other and willing to sacrifice themselves is always going to make me weak in the knees. And actually getting hurt in the process - makes me a puddle of happy goo. But what makes your story stand out among so many other stories posted is [a] your vivid, believable details that give the story a you-are-there quality, in an adventure we haven't seen umpteen times already in fic, and [b] honestly? It's a rare rare fic writer that has flawless prose without a single bad word choice, or cliche, or spelling/punctuation/grammar error that takes the reader out of the flow. I'm kind of a stickler for perfection in my fic *g*. I want to get totally lost in the moment, and not be interrupted by noticing little mistakes. And this story is scrupulously crafted. There's not a moment when I stop and think about what the writer is trying to do - I'm thinking of nothing but Sam and Dean's predicament from the first word to the last. Simply said - you rock, sister! |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nicely done. gotta love the hurt -its a sickness i know. can't wait to read more so please update soon and thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Confession - I actually read this one before going to work this morning, but I've learned my lesson about reviews before coffee. :D I am amazed at your ability to hold the action going for a sustained period AND make the action easy to follow and exciting at the same time. Well done! The boys' voices ring so true in this chapter I had to laugh. Not at their situation, but at how much Dean's words sounded like his smart ss, I'm hiding how much I'm hurting ways and Sam's like his, my brother is being a stubborn idiot and how the heck are we going to get out of this one? I know, that's a long description, but it is something we've seen time and again on the show, and you really captured it. Loving it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have found a new way to torture the boys - that's pretty clever in this busy fandom. Really great description of the drama - your own clear ideas of the unfolding dangers and Hurt! is well done - very visual and very involving! Can't wait for the next one... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'll say it again, this has got to be the most descriptive, well written story on this freakin' site. With both boys badly hurt and the others having no idea where they are I'm finding myself so lost in these chapters that I feel like I'm there. THIS IS AMAZING! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! I will honestly admit that this wasn't my first choice to read from the summary, but I clicked on it because I saw who the author was. OMG, and you have not disappointed! OMG! This story is amazing! I seriously cannot get my breath back from reading this and you really have me genuinely scared for Sam and Dean! What's going to happen next? OMG! I cannot wait for the weekend and the final chapter! GREAT JOB and can't wait for mroe! Anxiously Waiting, ~*~Stacee Phelps~*~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good stuff! Keep it up! |