|Reviews for Bay of Fire|
| Scriptive chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
I can't wait for more
| myselfonly chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
OH! This is different! I like this; I've always liked the way you write the boys and this looks like another winner. Nice one, looking forward to the next episode!
| friendly chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
awesome start. cna't wait for more
| xlozx chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
Great start : - )
Evil cliffy there but a good one.
Looking forward to the next part.
| deangirl1 chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
That is a truly, truly evil cliffie! But SO worth it to have a new story from you! And stop hiding behind the "novice" moniker - so, so NOT a novice! I am in AWE of the knowledge - or possibly research that you had to do for this about the sailing vessel etc... wow!
As always, a wonderful plot, great dialogue and superb characterization - the Winchesters are your oyster (hm - that's an interesting image really...)!
You have ended - by the way - with my very own fully formed neurotic phobia about sailing. I can't set foot in anything that tips on the water - no sailboats - EVER - because I know what will happen: the boat will tip over, I will get hit in the head with the mast and be trapped under the boat where I will drown. I was NOT a delight at summer camp when they took us sailing - they had to put me ashore... not a happy memory...
I have a favour to ask of you, so will pm you...
| DeanBean chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
That was a great first chapter
Poor Dean and Sam ;(
I hope they're okay
I can't wait for the next chapter
More when you can
| shelby02 chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
I am always happy to see that you posted a story. You haven't disappointed with this one...great start! I look forward to the update.
| Tididooo chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
Wow, an amazing first chapter, I just can't wait for the second one!
| funkyhigh chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
So now i know how Dean hurt his back! loving this fic!
| BlueEyedDemonLiz chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
Lovely to see another story from you and this one is really great. I love how exciting it is and the whumpage has already made my day.
I can't wait for next week now, though I really shouldn't be wishing my weekends anyway : D Liz x
| luvjase chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
And she's BACK! All hail the Queen of the Cliffhangers! This was awesome! Loved how you just threw them into the ocean and then used the "flashback". Really loving the high seas stuff. Totally out of the boys' element. And as always, great job with the boys! Can't wait 'til the next installment.
| Rachelly chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
Oh! This is wonderful! I've always wanted to read a fic about the boys being stranded at sea..and this one takes the cake. Both brothers are injured, Sam totally limp and in the protective care of his big bro Dean! Awesome! I love limpSam/protective angsty Dean fics! Your descriptions are awesome here...from the way you introduced the brothers bobbing in the water, Sam lifeless and Dean desperately holding on to him while facing down the Atlantic to protect him. Then the story line itself/the hunt...is awesome! Can't wait to read on! Enjoy your weekend as you won't be left sleepless from such a cliffy! Giggles~Rachelly
| pandora jazz chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
What a great mystery, a haunted ship.
You have done a wonderful job with the brothers and their voices. I love that Bobby is involved in this hunt too.
I like how you grabbed our attention with the injuried brothers and than we got to find out how they ended up in the water.
I'll look for your next update.
Thanks for sharing your story with us.
| catchme21 chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
Holy fo'shizzle...this is quite the tale you're weaving...or floating...whateva...
I love it when writer's start out with the really bad stuff first, grabs a reader's attention. Then you backstory it, and leave it with where you began (if any of this makes sense...it's been a really long day...)...and I feel like you've left me on a cliffy, even though I know how the boys are going to end up.
It's bed time. But I'm glad I could catch this! Looking forward to more. :)
| Thorny Hedge chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
If it's a sickness, I hope there's no cure. I love it. Looking forward to Chapter 2.