Reviews for Crystal Clear
Guest chapter 4 . 6/2/2013
Put me on the list ;P
zaq chapter 12 . 3/24/2011
sorry it's not much of a review but, I just can't wait for the sequel.
zaq chapter 11 . 3/24/2011
liked the irony about the bunnies. if you are the one who writes the flashbacks then Very Good Job! I think you are, right? five pov changes! congrats!
zaq chapter 8 . 3/24/2011
good nudge pov. liked how you explained what happened through max's pov
zaq chapter 9 . 3/24/2011
funny notes before chapter as is on all of them, and ending notes. once again, good pov switching! 4 times and all were clear
zaq chapter 7 . 3/24/2011
watchoutitsgonnablow for gazzy and bambieyesmaster for angel, very funny! Also "are you human?" was a good one
zaq chapter 6 . 3/24/2011
very good intro! soounds very... poetic? might I say? as always, I love reading about crystal, I always wanted to find out what happpened to the others that they rescued.
zaq chapter 5 . 3/24/2011
very good pov changes! not confusing at all. I love the story so far
fangsgirl123 chapter 12 . 7/9/2009
aww... her brother risked her life to save her... now thats love! and of course angels gonna save him... shes too sweet to let someone die like that!
fangsgirl123 chapter 11 . 7/9/2009
oh my gosh... i hope that crystals alright... and you actually used the bunnies... that was hilarous... and i loved the door part!
fangsgirl123 chapter 10 . 7/9/2009
yay bunnies! haha! hm i have no freakin clue who the unknown person is...
fangsgirl123 chapter 9 . 7/9/2009
wow a building of max... thats weird.
fangsgirl123 chapter 8 . 7/9/2009
crystal needs to realize that without her, the flock will lose... she needs to help...
fangsgirl123 chapter 7 . 7/9/2009
poor crystal... she shouldnt feel bad about being happy...
fangsgirl123 chapter 6 . 7/9/2009
yay truce! those are always good... sometimes! haha
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