Reviews for A Different Beginning
Guest chapter 87 . 3/18
I think it was amazing it's the best fan fiction ever
Benedict Cumberb chapter 2 . 2/26
THinsg chapter 1 . 2/26
TheWateringWizard chapter 49 . 2/17
Oops another secret James didn't reveal to Harry! Lily isn't dead
TheWateringWizard chapter 40 . 2/16
Hahaha the song was absolutely hilarious!
TheWateringWizard chapter 29 . 2/16
I knew Bones was under the Imperius. Every single fix I've read portrays her in a good way. It was impossible that she would've been mean on purpose in your story.

And YES! Finally they're dating! Wouhou! I was waiting for this moment so much
TheWateringWizard chapter 28 . 2/16
Wouhou he kissed her! I would say fuck Corner and kiss Ginny!
TheWateringWizard chapter 26 . 2/16
Yes Harry you're nearly there!
TheWateringWizard chapter 23 . 2/16
I really love you. You make changes, Fudge is not minister but it's Mrs Bones. For some reason Fudge still holds a position of power and he's the one Harry tells about Voldy. Why isn't it Madam Bones? Well we can't have everything. Harry is just inches away from Ginny it has to happen soon
TheWateringWizard chapter 21 . 2/16
Well at least Harry got over Cho quickly! I just hope that Harry inches toward Ginny now! Can't stand her and Corner
TheWateringWizard chapter 14 . 2/16
Please please please I hope you don't put Ginny with Harry too late. He loves Cho now but I think the talk the three gave to Harry and the one Sirius gave to Ginny might help speed up things
TheWateringWizard chapter 10 . 2/16
Good thing Harry went after Ginny. There's a dialogue that, if people were a little more intelligent, wouldn't make sense. He doesn't want to be the Secret Keeper and suggests Peter but as he works for Voldy, he takes Peter to you're telling me that James or Remus don't think it makes no sense?! If Sirius was working for Voldy, he would've accepted to be the Secret Keeper and just go to Voldy straight away! Why make things complicated?!
That's why you can't stick to canon with changes like that
TheWateringWizard chapter 9 . 2/16
Okay I don't understand why you want to stick to canon so badly! It doesn't even make sense anymore! You're just freakin using Mr Weasley's speech, had on little detail and make James say it! How can James be so dumb to simply think that Sirius LED Peter to Voldy?! James and Sirius are like freakin brothers! The first that would come to his mind is that Peter is the traitor not freakin Sirius! Didn't Hagrid tell James that Sirius came to the house thinking they were dead and that he was devastated?! That would make him freakin think for a second! James has to be the dumbest Auror, he doesn't even sit down and think for a freakin second!
At least you made me happy with Ginny as I think he didn't have a conversation like this with her in canon. but Padfoot was in diagon alley and saw James. THAT must mean some changes! He knows now that at least James is alive! And Harry doesn't have to stay in the house. The property must be warded so he can go in the garden at least

I just pray that it will start to deviate a little at one point.
TheWateringWizard chapter 8 . 2/16
That's the problem I have with your story: James and Lily are alive but everything is the bloody freakin canon! You're telling me that his father saw him talk to snake and "it didn't click"?! What the hell? A normal James Potter would've pushed the issue further and discovered that his son is a Parseltongue and told him about it! His dad isn't clever enough to research and find that monsters that can petrify people are Basilisks?! Hermione found it on her own! Of course a bloody Auror can find it. And when you finally realise that your son is a Parseltongue, isn't easy to link it to the fact that he can hear a voice that others can't? I mean for Harry and friends, they're 12 but for James?
It pisses me off because James is an Auror and he didn't try to research on his own to help his son
noooooo chapter 45 . 2/11
how could you kill lexy?

she was acually great
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